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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Antagonist

    He eats
    Pringles,
    Cashews, cheese cream, crackers
    Plastic ham
    corned beef, butter
    Margarine.

    He eats to fill
    drinks to empty

    Finds his antagonist
    The c unt with the words
    Eats donuts
    Kills.
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 02-10-2020 at 07:18 AM.

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    love this one Jerry

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    I like the level of bitterness. If I were a man, I'd probably even like this poem.

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    Excellent.

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    No viewer discretion warning Jerry?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    I like the level of bitterness. If I were a man, I'd probably even like this poem.
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