there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt astonish
it has become a stoic
it thrives under
heroic.
there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt astonish
it has become a stoic
it thrives under
heroic.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Enjoyed this little offering.... the title throws me off a little bit though.
This is how I scanned it with line breaks:
"there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt
astonish
it has become
a stoic
it thrives under
heroic"
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 10-03-2019 at 09:52 AM. Reason: "
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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Last edited by tailor STATELY; 10-03-2019 at 09:50 AM. Reason: duplicate bug
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
taitor STATELY many thanks for reading and the feedback. I liked the way you scanned it.Originally Posted by tailor STATELY
Sorry about the title. I could not think of what to put so I just put
strict
instead.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Loved this poem, cacian!
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Danik thank you.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
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