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    subtle

    desire reduces
    stress
    it is the combination
    of interest
    happy it cares
    and the emotional
    inquest
    it has countless
    imaginations
    ready to tackle
    depress
    the triads of life
    the here and now may neglect
    to a speck it is everything
    time would elect
    modern life recreations
    reflect
    it is worth giving it respect.
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    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I like the positive tone of the poem!
    Great rhythm as well.
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pensive View Post
    I like the positive tone of the poem!
    Great rhythm as well.
    Pensive great to see you around.
    Thank you for reading
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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