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    imagine

    how dope
    is it to
    feel one has nothing to fear?
    to not question the here
    the now and the past
    that happens intervenes
    and casts shadows over mast
    a little less austere
    life could claim it has every asset
    prejudices blaze
    it just needs one
    to entertain her all prospect
    it can turn into a band
    everyone would want to be her stand.
    music to all ears here comes
    the pop star of everything that
    hears
    no demagogue could ever queer.
    Last edited by cacian; 09-15-2019 at 06:07 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I like the tone of this poem. The use of "dope" in pop culture is interesting. I like the last line especially: "no demagogue could ever queer."

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    tailor many thanks for reading.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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