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    The Druid
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    I Wonder One-I Wonder Two

    I WONDER ONE:

    I wonder how to paint a poem
    Like the man from Innisfree
    I wonder how a fire burns
    Or how a man can fight the sea.
    I wonder where this life leads
    I wonder, often wonder?

    I WONDER TWO:

    Morning doves coo coo
    The coffee brews
    The crossword puzzles me.
    The traffic jams
    The business scams
    The migraines
    The petty games
    Perhaps it is only me
    I wonder?

    A grounded bird
    A finless fish
    A horse without a gait.
    A traffic light
    A honking horn
    We move
    We stop
    We wait.
    Another breath
    Air intake
    I wonder?
    Last edited by JackShea; 03-10-2007 at 08:12 PM. Reason: sp

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    You write this poem in the same kind of style I've recently inherited and I must say I like your poem a lot. Pretty great.
    My hide hides the heart inside

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