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    The Deal---A Satire

    The Deal---A Satire
    by MazHur


    You have ruled long enough,
    Oh, dear Supreme Spirit
    Of Evil and Unrighteousness
    You have done enough harm
    To the human race
    Brought enough misery
    And trouble for people
    You are the cause and reason
    For all the unrest and chaos
    And malignant wickedness
    Prevailing in this world of God
    O Lucifer,Fiend, Devil,
    O You Old Scrach, Old Nick,
    O Lord, Old Gooseberry,
    Lord of the Wicked !
    We have served you faithfully
    since this world came into being
    We stood by you
    When You challenged God
    For his creation of Adam
    It was we, you disciples,
    Who assigned You the power
    And will to defy God
    It was we who placed you
    On the Devils Throne
    As King of the Dark World
    It is we who convassd and convinced
    The human kinds of your doctrine--
    the doctrine of Evil and Disorder
    It's we who supported you
    In fulfillment of your unrighteous
    Aims and objects and designs
    All over God's earth
    Distracting humans from your adversary
    The God of Mercy and Magnificence
    And leading them to the Wrong Path
    It's we who blocked the minds
    And Hearts Of humans
    From the remembrance of God
    And made most of them
    critically critical
    Of God's Supreme Being!
    It's we, your army of Devils,
    Who did more than anyone else
    Could have done for You
    To propagate Evil---
    Universal Evil--
    All over the world !
    It's all due to us that
    This world of God
    Has been turned into Hell
    Enough, enough, we have done for You
    You have ruled long enough
    And had your time
    You have lost the zeal and fervour
    Of Evil and Demonship
    It is now our turn to choose
    Another Leader for us !
    Hearing this ,,,
    The supreme Leader of All Evils
    The Old Gooseberry, the Demon
    Had to open up
    His diabolic tongue
    To allay the fears
    And apprehensions of his Comrades
    And say...........

    Well, my dear little devils
    I am proud of you
    And acknowledge your services
    You have rendered to our Community
    In spreading Satanic hold
    Over the humans
    Over their minds and thoughts
    I appreciate the great work
    You have done to blacken
    and block Men's hearts
    From the remembrance of God
    It's not you only
    Whom I am indebted
    for my obedience and loyalty
    But also to the multitude of humans
    On this earth
    who are also your cousins
    and unknowingly my disciples!
    Well, I have an offer for you
    A wonderful deal
    A package gift of paramount Evil
    Vote for me and
    Let me sit on the Devil's Throne
    Despite all the shortcomings
    True or false assertions
    You seem to have gathered about Me
    I expect you to accept the deal
    Lest God intervenes
    And All goodness is let to prevail
    With nothing more for us
    to haggle about
    So, accept my deal
    Let me rule the Evil
    Bow to me in Obedience
    As that's the only choice
    Left for you---
    You who are not free from guilt--
    Guilt of not doing
    what you ought to have done
    In destroying God's world
    With Evil and unrighteousness
    More than our followers
    Still live by God's name
    And I don't like it !
    Your performance over the years
    Has not been upto the mark!
    You have to do better
    In propagating Evil on Earth
    Until no one remembers God
    And the Hearts of all Men
    Are blackened with the ink
    Of evil and vulgarity
    Until then
    I will stay as your King
    Without any demur from you
    In return for your support
    And promise
    To perform better in future
    I will reward you
    By forgiving All your faults,
    Corruption and crimes
    And further give you a free hand
    To make as much pelf as you want
    Through Evil means and designs
    i will also forgive
    All your murderous actions
    Your scandalous conduct
    Anything wrong you have committed
    In the past
    These are my words of 'honour' to you
    But, To affirm things more unambiguously
    I'll put all this in an Ordinance
    And sign it for record
    This is a Deal
    Take it or leave it
    By the Grace of God
    I am not going to Quit !
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    I am a lover of flowers

    Flowers
    by mazHur Butt

    I am a lover of flowers
    And who isn't ?
    Unless his heart is made of stone
    See how the floral .buds bloom
    And shapen into whorls
    Spires, hurls and curls
    Of petalled architecture
    Of a spring of rainbow colors
    A spout of celestial redolence
    So soothing to the eyes
    Comforting to heart
    Ah, these ubiquitous bits
    Of corrollate beauty
    Harbingers of Spring
    Swing with joy and pride
    To the pleasure of all hearts
    Only to wrinkle and wither away
    At the gush of first autumnal wind
    These emblems of sparkling beauty
    Prophetic gifts of Nature's blessing
    Botanical cherubs of God
    Live to please us, our hearts
    In moments happier and sad.
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    Last edited by mazHur; 10-08-2007 at 10:34 PM. Reason: spelling

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    Wow!!! That was long!!! I'm amazed you had the perserverence to write such a long poem. Some really good stuff in there.

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    Hi

    thanks for the appreciation, you can find my shorter stuff at Shared Haiku forum.

    The perspective of this poem is a corrupt military regime which is not prepared to quit and inorder to make its stay longer has struck a deal with patently corrupt politicians by waiving all charges against them.

    regards

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