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    Thanks Pumpey Bum. Your comments are very helpful...

    Thanks Pumpey Bum. Your comments are very helpful and I will pay attention to all of that in any future stories I post. I appreciate the details and sincerity. Feel free to comment as much as you...
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    By the way, I would really appreciate any...

    By the way, I would really appreciate any comments anyone might have. Ways of improving the story, what works? what Doesn't?
    Thanks.
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    Thanks, I appreciate it.

    Thanks, I appreciate it.
  4. Thread: Flyboy

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    loved it. that was realy good. very realistic,...

    loved it. that was realy good. very realistic, Matt's character was well developed
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    Tiki 2009-2018

    Harold just stood there staring at Tiki's corpse lying under an olive tree. At first he hoped she was sleeping, and he sought any indication that she might still be breathing. But gradually the full...
  6. Thread: Revisiting

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    Interesting story and I loved the title. Is there...

    Interesting story and I loved the title. Is there a part 2 coming up? I would love to know what happens next.
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    Thanks. And thank you again for our help...

    Thanks. And thank you again for our help...
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    Thanks, I just did. Hope it will help

    Thanks, I just did. Hope it will help
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    thanks. so far it hasnt been posted... I'll keep waiting

    thanks. so far it hasnt been posted... I'll keep waiting
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    Quick question

    How long does it take untill a story I wrote gets posted? I posted it about three days ago...
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    Here are some more weird animals that are...

    Here are some more weird animals that are endangered:
    Saiga antelope
    Pied tamarin
    Sea angel
    Golden snub-nosed monkey
    Olm/Proteus
    Did a lesson plan once about weird animals, these are the ones I...
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    Lessons in Breathing

    It was summer, must have been the hottest summer I had ever lived through. Walking down Brick street in Johnston, I felt as if I turned a corner into a suburb of hell. Sweat was trickling down my...
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    Lessons in Breathing

    It was summer, must have been the hottest summer I had ever lived through. Walking down Brick street in Johnston, I felt as if I turned a corner into a suburb of hell. Sweat was trickling down my...
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    hey everyone!

    I'm new here just trying out. I've always been interested in writing. I joined so I could post some stories and get some feedback. I welcome comments of all kinds. thank you.
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