Thanks Pumpey Bum. Your comments are very helpful and I will pay attention to all of that in any future stories I post. I appreciate the details and sincerity. Feel free to comment as much as you...
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Thanks Pumpey Bum. Your comments are very helpful and I will pay attention to all of that in any future stories I post. I appreciate the details and sincerity. Feel free to comment as much as you...
By the way, I would really appreciate any comments anyone might have. Ways of improving the story, what works? what Doesn't?
Thanks.
Thanks, I appreciate it.
loved it. that was realy good. very realistic, Matt's character was well developed
Harold just stood there staring at Tiki's corpse lying under an olive tree. At first he hoped she was sleeping, and he sought any indication that she might still be breathing. But gradually the full...
Interesting story and I loved the title. Is there a part 2 coming up? I would love to know what happens next.
Thanks. And thank you again for our help...
Thanks, I just did. Hope it will help
thanks. so far it hasnt been posted... I'll keep waiting
How long does it take untill a story I wrote gets posted? I posted it about three days ago...
Here are some more weird animals that are endangered:
Saiga antelope
Pied tamarin
Sea angel
Golden snub-nosed monkey
Olm/Proteus
Did a lesson plan once about weird animals, these are the ones I...
It was summer, must have been the hottest summer I had ever lived through. Walking down Brick street in Johnston, I felt as if I turned a corner into a suburb of hell. Sweat was trickling down my...
It was summer, must have been the hottest summer I had ever lived through. Walking down Brick street in Johnston, I felt as if I turned a corner into a suburb of hell. Sweat was trickling down my...
I'm new here just trying out. I've always been interested in writing. I joined so I could post some stories and get some feedback. I welcome comments of all kinds. thank you.