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'I cant stand this poison you are spitting at me' he says

Baby, dont you know
Im full of it.
Toxic levels of hate, anger and fear
Radiate from me for miles all around me,
in neon green dirty...

Red hot fury
Courses through

Alien blue veins
Red and blue
Make

Purple bruises
Across
Blistered knuckles

Nothing? ):

To be honest there wasn't a lot of intent with this poem, not really any hidden message unless you found one. It was more many thoughts going on in my head so i tried to turn those thoughts into a...

Twisted Whims
Thrown to the wall
Smashing resistance
To pieces of shattered hope
Gleeful pleasure forms
A fist of eager judgment

It comes crashing down
On paper thin walls
Broken in seconds

Break her in two
And divide those two
Till you have four
Four quarters of one
Which were split in two

Taken apart to build up
Those walls
Again

You hurt her
You really did

She pretended she’d moved on
She’d built the bridge

But she hadn't
Sharp razor like cuts appeared on the inside
And they never healed

Thank you, yes jack I see what you mean, at some points towards the end it kinda loses something. Hill, yeah, that exactly what I was trying to potray :D

Thank you hill, and yes perhaps there Is..

Why thank you Cacian, for taking the time to comment as well (:

Can you forgive her?
She's sorry
She lost track
Of where she was going
Kept walking
Walking
Running
In the wrong direction

The path was attractive at first

I respect what hills says from a critical point of view, but i see this poem as a poem or letter if you like, of passion of the moment. you weren't looking to be literally accurate, its obviously...

Oh wow. i absolutely loved the last verse where u compare the canvas to a woman's virginity and how she surrenders it to your "manic desire". Its a concept that's been thought of before (white canvas...

Ironically? This is kind of beautiful...

Yooo, CoverTheSun here, also a fellow noob, jus replying to welcome you aboard. Hope you find what your looking for and have fun on this site :)

Dark walls loom above,
like trees mysteriously meeting in a canopy,
to discuss the world from a height where secrets will remain secrets

Pushing and shoving to the extent of collapse....

Wow, that was brilliant, put a smile on my face :D

It hurts,
Deep in my belly, it pains.
In the pits on my chest, constricting.
Im like a dead man walking, with the exception of the pain,
It follows me like my shadow.
Its a part of me.

I call...

Why thank ya

Theres so many
She’s lost count
She lets them touch her, kiss her in hopes of feeling
Something
Anything
But she feels nothing
"Please, please", she want to feel alive again
She wants to...

Haaaai there everyone, im completely new to this and have absolutely no idea how it works. It appears as newcomers seem to post introduction threads or something, so i have followed suite :)

Sooo,...