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    My Sun Still Shines

    A shorter snippet inspired by M4ngos haikus. Though not in the haiku fashion, it's not often I feel the liberty to write something so condensed. Its fun and challenging. Thank you m4ngo for sharing...
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    Thanks for the insight Jerry. It is pretty...

    Thanks for the insight Jerry.

    It is pretty tough. This was a personal blip in time for me and I realize they can be hard for others to relate too. I might try to clear it up with editing at some...
  3. Thread: Wrong turn

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    I've been coming on here for a long time Jerry, I...

    I've been coming on here for a long time Jerry, I know how you feel. There are so many people I miss who used to share here: PrinceMyshkin, DarkMuse, JBI, qimissung, etc. It is so wonderful when I...
  4. Thread: News

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    To come to terms with death, now that's when one...

    To come to terms with death, now that's when one can truly live.

    If I was there I would learn how to rock climb
  5. Thread: Jenius

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    Bump Because it's so cute, fun, and witty!...

    Bump

    Because it's so cute, fun, and witty! Very pleasurable, Auntie!
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    Lovely, just lovely. Some beautiful imagery and...

    Lovely, just lovely. Some beautiful imagery and turn of phrase here. Your haikus are delightful snippets of depth.

    In particular like sad leaves and Write my Name in Solitude
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    You have a knack for unburying the buried Jerry.

    You have a knack for unburying the buried Jerry.
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    Im glad you all enjoyed it.

    Im glad you all enjoyed it.
  9. Thread: To my son

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    Thank you for sharing this personal and touching...

    Thank you for sharing this personal and touching piece Jerry. Love and loss is so hard, it hurts like hell. The memory on the playset and knowing what made your son happy just brought me to tears. I...
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    Wrong turn

    Route inputted into GPS
    Hmm, poor reception
    I'll have to rely on my own sense of direction.

    Im pretty sure I've made a wrong turn.
    I think I've made this turn before.
    If I recall,
    This road...
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    Dearest Executioner

    Delete
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    When the shutters come down - and last orders...

    When the shutters come down -
    and last orders are called-
    her dazed husband looks round
    where his sentence has stalled..
    as if seeing her suddenly,
    he squeezes her chin
    and with a slight slur,...
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    "since time immemorial there's been dealings...

    "since time immemorial
    there's been dealings this way
    what you wish to manifest
    depends on how much you pay."

    Money is like magic and the women who wield it witches.
    So thoroughly enjoyed...
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    Let's get Together

    Today I was the girl I used to be.

    As a child I watched people at the commissary,
    just stood there staring:

    Watched loosely held hands.
    She wide-eyed gawking longingly at diamond rings behind...
  15. Thread: The Rabbit

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    This is quite a gem. Beautiful imagery of all the...

    This is quite a gem. Beautiful imagery of all the correlations of death and transformation. Life in it's constant state of exchange. Definitely one of my favorites written on here.
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    Divorce

    Every detail written,
    by two hands
    upon fresh paper.
    Unerasable letters flow into a work in progress,
    a one-of-a-kind story,
    their newest original manuscript.

    Each hand grasps a corner...
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    "You'd think I were some snooty chef from the...

    "You'd think I were some snooty
    chef from the Cordon Bleu
    fussing over a feast
    for some fastidious dignitary
    the way this social-climbing sandwich
    has commanded my attention"


    NO one can...
  18. I felt the intensity, every moment of worry and...

    I felt the intensity, every moment of worry and relief.

    If this is a true event I am happy for you in your wife's (?) recovery
  19. Thread: quartet

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    "alas the world has bravely set sail" Very...

    "alas
    the world has bravely set
    sail"

    Very bold opening, I like it!

    "blue lagoons swell
    against the winds that charm"

    These lines provide some lovely imagery with sensory input
  20. Thread: lyrical

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    lyrics are the foundations of relics that...

    lyrics are the foundations of relics
    that preserve when the heart
    reserves what a feeling deserves.

    This is especially beautifully said, to think of our words/poems as the foundation of the...
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    Hi Cacian, glad to see an offering! Lyrical is...

    Hi Cacian, glad to see an offering!

    Lyrical is the perfect title for this :)

    When I am writing metered poetry, I write the meter as if it were music.
    Music is fairly predictable in that it is...
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    It's hard to choose a favorite here Pompey, these...

    It's hard to choose a favorite here Pompey, these are all excellently written. I'm pretty certain you are a literary major.

    I think though if I had to choose, it would be "Thistle or A Snakeskin...
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    delete, duplicate.

    delete, duplicate.
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    All credit for inspiration goes to you Pompey. It...

    All credit for inspiration goes to you Pompey. It was after I read your "Thistle or a Snakeskin Found" that I wrote this. Took me a week. Though, your writing is still more refined. Your rhythm is...
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    Daaaannnggg, Pompey Bum! These are exceptional...

    Daaaannnggg, Pompey Bum!

    These are exceptional and I love each one! I am now a huge admirer. I think I am going to read all your past posts now.

    You make me want to write much better than I...
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