I like how you disconnect the human aspect of some things to express their foreignness. All the little things are good, and written very well. There is something looming outside of the story itself,...
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I like how you disconnect the human aspect of some things to express their foreignness. All the little things are good, and written very well. There is something looming outside of the story itself,...
I wrote this in hopes of getting a feel for describing what we don't know--the place where the forgotten goes, ghosts, the place in our visual field where we see visions. I hope you find some...