"Would you tell me, please, which way I ought to go from here?" "That depends a good deal on where you want to get to." "I don't much care where..." "Then it doesn't matter which way you go..." ...
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"Would you tell me, please, which way I ought to go from here?" "That depends a good deal on where you want to get to." "I don't much care where..." "Then it doesn't matter which way you go..." ...
It's an alright poem, but your grammar, spelling, and sentence mechanics leave something to be desired. Clean that up, and it's pretty good, as well as funny.
Whoa...been almost a month, and still no new posts. lol...guess you guys just don't like criticizing poetry.
Definitely the Tempest. Although I haven't read all of the histories, yet.
Ok...I really don't have anything to add to the discussion, except that it is spelled SEPARATED. Thank you. Misspelled words annoy me for some reason :D
I liked it...it reminded me of that chapter in the bible describing love...1 Corinthians 13, I believe.
Love is long-suffering and kind. Love is not jealous, it does not brag, does not get puffed up, does not behave indecently, does not look for its own interests, does not become provoked. It does not...
Speak softly, and carry a big stick.
Do, or do not. There is no "try."
I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now.
It takes a big man to cry, a bigger man to laugh, and a very big man to...
Rap could be considered a form of art, although a very vulgar, crude, and disgusting form. There are very few kinds of music I won't listen to...heavy metal and rap are about it. The lyrics could be...
I'll post the rest when I finish the rest lol. I dunno though...it might be done, as it is. It's so hard to tell when a poem is really finished.
I just went on MSN, searched for Through the Looking Glass, and here I am lol.
I usually write only verse, because I can get it to flow better than prose. It seems easier to me, and more expressive, but most of my classmates would much rather write a short story than a poem.
:) Good poem...kinda dark, but that's even better.
I would like to see something by Hemingway on the site, preferably For Whom the Bell Tolls, if you don't mind.
Hmm...ok. Hope.
This is the Song I Hear...tell me what you think. And it's not quite finished, so if you want something changed, suggest it.
I hear all this Earth singing, a solemn and mournful tune.
From among...