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I got it
a long excited SMS
with smile
Why did you write me to say
that we don't know each other
I wonder if we were ever classmates
and also best friend during the studies
I wonder why we...

sounds and steps in one short second
awesome

hi,
thanks for the comments..! :blush:
I wanted to say that I were not alone in the rain. maybe, you never know if you have to worry or what to feel.
what would you feel..? :)

My phone rings
every week
after you call my mum
And I do not understand
Why your window is always dark
When I come

"Cup of red,"
she waits and
cows are milked
than drop

skycrossing

tears hidden in the smile
even the title
is
amazing
Thank you

excellent idea - and excellent poem

the "poetic rain"
this poem evokes me falling warm drops in a hot summer - great romantic piece!

"Believe me, man!"

cara car! ;)



this is very similar to the Czech

en ten tyky
dva spaliky
cert vyletel z elektriky

Hi,
a small idea:
let's write a 4-line-poems about animals - cute, fateful, funny or detail describing..!

my contribution:


By the time the sun turns red
Kitty Babe will eat its hat...

two cars back
you left snack

veal-expressed

Cats eat hats

to be afraid of yourself.. sad fear

yes, it was a typo, thank you ;)

it should have been a bit exotic... a bit crazy and unbelievable
thank you for your comment!

If you look out of your car
you'll see them - waving hair and
burning wings - on caracara
there's flying by: a capybara

your hyperboles are very natural ;) and the methaphors, personifications--
a poetic piece of life

I think, the first verse would be enough, it evokes the nice image of the emotion stream.. The second one is maybe a bit pathetic (but may it's only my view).

I enjoy your poem. I always like to read rather shorter poems - but with a surprising idea - and without the last line that poem is a bit usual (for me).
With that line, however, according to me,...

that's accurate. kind of being and non-being there at the same moment

Playing with sounds
It hawks on the desk
Like you've never been there
wrists draw dots and line

what everything should be
in a flash of wine

say

... "Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world." ...

that's really worthwile.

I was quite surprised how the poem changes in the middle rhythm and content, too. maybe it's lyrics?