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    Definitely an improvement, and the delimiting of...

    Definitely an improvement, and the delimiting of determined with commas makes it's sense apparent, but it does put an unwelcome caesura in the line. Subjectively, I just don't think determined is the...
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    Hello tS: nice to see you around. A nice...

    Hello tS: nice to see you around.

    A nice spring poem filled with scents and flowers. But I'm pulled up a bit by your use of, "determined to". Determined on would make more sense in context. The...
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