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I'm so happy to hear that ,I'll do my best with God's will.

Regards

Well,I like the way you discuss things,this is pretty good.I like Huck's vision to the poem thanks so much ,eventhough,this poem has nth to do with court or life it's a very faithful about the...

Thanks guys.

I'm so grateful to all of you for those comments,but I'm lost can you state it clearly,what do you think of my poem is it that bad?

It's alright,I said before that any critics are heighly appreciated and that's the way to be a good writer isn't?

I like the way you wrote the poem it carries so deep meanings thank so much.

Nice words ,I admire the poem.Humour is very important in our lives.Thanks for sharing.

Oh great words I like them so much.

Thanks for the advice,may be you've said that woz we belong to different cultures .But I wanna know your point of view concerning the way it's written regardless of the aim.

THANKS so much I do...

Hello,guys:angel:

How are you doing?,hope you are doing great.

I has been a long time since I've posted a poem here hope you 're gonna enjoy reading those humble lines.:angel:

Any critics...

Hello Lumiere,(lumiére is French means light)

It's a philosophical piece of writing ,I'm not sure if I get the meaning right ,I think the main issue here is that life is full of events and so on...

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nice story ,it has some sense of truth in it,coz Adam was the first person to be created and then came Eve from Adam as our Holy book says.

Here the main is as Plato said"We are social...

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wow very nice piece ,full of bitterness and sorrow,you know what when I read it I just felt that it fits with the poem I wrote today" whispers of a lonely heart",eventhough,I wrote it with...

Hello everybody,

How are you,hope you are doing good?

Any way ,this is my newest poem it's fresh I wrote it 5 minutes ago:D lol so if there is any thing to add to it or omit from it plz tell me...

Hello again;:)

Here is an other poem of mine:D,a little bit old but hope you'll enjoy it.

Critics 'again' are heighly appreciated:thumbs_up

I Confess in the Dark

When the eye of heavens...

Hello ur shadow;

your poem is very nice full of emotions but I have an advice for you ,pay attention to the use of" to be" either plural or singular.

best of luck

keep it up

If we’re lucky we’ll dine on mouse
And Oliver will still be asking for more


Those lines are nice I think you mean Oliver Twist don't you?

very nice poem and eventhought;I don't celebrate...

Thanks so much I liked the upper part it's enjoyable

thanks a bunch

Thanks so much and I'm happier coz it brought the smile to your face

Thanks a lot for the advice I do really appreciate that and I'll check the link soon.:)

Thanks so much:)

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I think you should thank depression coz it's the source of inspiration (it led you to write that fascinating poem ).

Te sun dooes it symbolize hope for you,it seems that you are a...

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I WROTE THIS poem about the sea during summer holidays hope you'll enjoy it.

any critics are heighly appreciated,

NB:this poem is a personification.

here it is

Honestly I've read about Haiku but don't know how it is written coz I write free verses no more

excuse me I don't get ya?