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I dont really have nightmares anymore, I dream semi lucidly almost every single night, so now they have all just sorta merged together, good and bad, frightening and facinating. I generally dream in...

This poem makes me think of beige. I hate beige. Who was looking at brown and was like "
WOOOOW thats way to intense, better tone it down there!"

As always I am a fan of your poetry, though for me a few of the lines sound a bit forced or overworked.

As a poet, we must strive to say as much as we can with as few words, always try to "cut the...

Much better revision. Sets the scene and adds waaay more depth, like you said now its a story fo sho!

If I were you I would probably delete this thread, or start a new one with the revised story,...

Personally I would opt for the oak door type senario, just because its a bit classier ya know? Not quite as "hollywood" in that it doesnt spell it out completely for you.

Oh what, now ur gonna start bashing on wearing potato sacks? Jeez strict much.

I understand the thought behind it, but I dont believe it really works to that effect. Alot of the time it doesnt...

Nope, I would be putting that bad mofo on, then becoming the new dark lord, and then making another ring even more powerful then that one.

You can make napalm by mixing diesel with styrofoam.

Flounder and other "flat fish" are born with their eyes like normal fish, one on each side. As they get older the eye shifts sides and they are...

grandpa and grandma

grandad and grandma on moms side

but they are all dead save grandma on moms side.

NCIS, every box set.

Not that I ever watch the show, but Im sure that BienvenuJDC would have a good time and that would make me happy :D

no, because in australia they have no pennies, so its an impossibility. I will however give you a dollar and u can keep the change if u want.

If you had a million dollars, would you buy me a...

Old school myths rock my world. I love Homers Odysseus, but its a bit long. Having trouble thinkin of my absolute favorite, so I am going to go with the one about the Minotaur.

Chick digs getting...

I have a bit of a sadistic and dry sense of humor, so for me its Hunter S. Thompson.

His insightful and often drug fueled rants just crack me up.

I half agree with the BEARJEW!!!! I like the style of the jumbled quick ranting. It shows reflection of the character, a hardcore internet user. I do agree with him in the fact it could use just a...

So, is the guy the partner of the woman? And the guy who drinks the honey (the dude) telling the guy that his missus is cheating on him in the first paragraph? Then in the second hes going to...

I am surprised no one has responded.

I love this peice. One of the better ones I have read lately. I love how you wrap the philosophies and ideas and behaviours of humans around the war and...

I can understand the philosphy here, I personally use other indicators though.

You could have a girl dressed head to toe in a burka or a burlap sack, I can tell you if shes into you from her eyes...

Interesting read, and a pretty accurate take on things I would say.

Though, I must admit I was a bit disapointed that she didnt end up with the guy. It would have been interesting to watch both of...

Never stop writing in rhyme man.

I love the way you bounce thro a poem. Always easily read and always enjoyed.

At first I thought maybe it was a story about australian soldiers, which are nicknamed "diggers"

I was wrong.

Nice story, little bit predictable but still a good read.

see, I am telling you, the reason that we are having this argument is because the system is faulty, just like all systems.

no singular form of government can ever tick the boxes for everyone, so...

Having lived in both Canada and Australia, in Canada I went to a public school and had to wear casual clothes and in Australia I was forced to go to a private catholic school and wear a uniform.
...

clown

Ya ide definately date female me

in fact ive been looking for her my whole life

someone smart, funny, GIVING, a few nice talents, angel in the kitchen devil in the bedroom, easy to look at but...

Abras dont be a fool

Nothing can stand against our cyborg supremecy! You wouldnt stand in the way of evolution would you? If so, we will have to crush you like a puny ant in our giant cyborg...