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    Thank you Bii for the help. how is this? I still...

    Thank you Bii for the help. how is this? I still think that the last line in the second stanza is all wrong. What if i switched the last lines of the first and second stanza?


    A fine rain...
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    This is much better. I can be so chatty sometimes...

    This is much better. I can be so chatty sometimes even though I know that less is more.



    This is such a complement.
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    Thanks to everyone who has offered help....

    Thanks to everyone who has offered help. :thumbs_up
    I still think there is work to be done.


    With fine tiny drops my fields are drenched with rain.
    It falls as if it has all day to do its...
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    You are both very helpful and I hope more people...

    You are both very helpful and I hope more people chime in with their two cents worth.

    You know that kind of rain that is so soft and almost slow and each drop is tiny and fine but there are...
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    a work in progress...

    something I've been stuck on and trying for force to it's end so please help me finish this thought and change what is weak about it.


    Softly, in fine tiny drops my fields are drenched with...
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