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    Hi MH - I've been giving this some thought. I...

    Hi MH - I've been giving this some thought. I think these bits are lovely:



    especially the 'there is pleasure in its pace' - what a beautiful line. And this:



    The middle stanza, is fine...
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    Perhaps, motherhubbard, what you need to try and...

    Perhaps, motherhubbard, what you need to try and do is capture this:



    which is so very beautifully expressed.

    I'll need a little more time to digest the poem to be more constructive. On...
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