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  1. Thread: Divorce

    by Shadowlight
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    Divorce

    Every detail written,
    by two hands
    upon fresh paper.
    Unerasable letters flow into a work in progress,
    a one-of-a-kind story,
    their newest original manuscript.

    Each hand grasps a corner...
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    "You'd think I were some snooty chef from the...

    "You'd think I were some snooty
    chef from the Cordon Bleu
    fussing over a feast
    for some fastidious dignitary
    the way this social-climbing sandwich
    has commanded my attention"


    NO one can...
  3. I felt the intensity, every moment of worry and...

    I felt the intensity, every moment of worry and relief.

    If this is a true event I am happy for you in your wife's (?) recovery
  4. Thread: quartet

    by Shadowlight
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    "alas the world has bravely set sail" Very...

    "alas
    the world has bravely set
    sail"

    Very bold opening, I like it!

    "blue lagoons swell
    against the winds that charm"

    These lines provide some lovely imagery with sensory input
  5. Thread: lyrical

    by Shadowlight
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    lyrics are the foundations of relics that...

    lyrics are the foundations of relics
    that preserve when the heart
    reserves what a feeling deserves.

    This is especially beautifully said, to think of our words/poems as the foundation of the...
  6. Thread: lyrical

    by Shadowlight
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    Hi Cacian, glad to see an offering! Lyrical is...

    Hi Cacian, glad to see an offering!

    Lyrical is the perfect title for this :)

    When I am writing metered poetry, I write the meter as if it were music.
    Music is fairly predictable in that it is...
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    It's hard to choose a favorite here Pompey, these...

    It's hard to choose a favorite here Pompey, these are all excellently written. I'm pretty certain you are a literary major.

    I think though if I had to choose, it would be "Thistle or A Snakeskin...
  8. Thread: Wildfire

    by Shadowlight
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    delete, duplicate.

    delete, duplicate.
  9. Thread: Wildfire

    by Shadowlight
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    All credit for inspiration goes to you Pompey. It...

    All credit for inspiration goes to you Pompey. It was after I read your "Thistle or a Snakeskin Found" that I wrote this. Took me a week. Though, your writing is still more refined. Your rhythm is...
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    Daaaannnggg, Pompey Bum! These are exceptional...

    Daaaannnggg, Pompey Bum!

    These are exceptional and I love each one! I am now a huge admirer. I think I am going to read all your past posts now.

    You make me want to write much better than I...
  11. Thread: Wildfire

    by Shadowlight
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    Wildfire

    He placed years of waiting upon her cushioned breast,
    Light with trust he laid heavy burdens to rest.
    The tides of sleep smoothed the crags of his eyes and brow.
    Flooding upon them, a tidal...
  12. Thread: Hide

    by Shadowlight
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    Hide

    Inspired by MiltonSatyr



    Hide

    When there is nowhere left to run.

    Hide
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    I'd like to see some reposts Pompey!

    I'd like to see some reposts Pompey!
  14. Thread: Black Bag

    by Shadowlight
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    There's an intensity present in your vivid...

    There's an intensity present in your vivid description of a tortuous situation. I think it would have added some intrigue to have added some stanzas of any potential racing thoughts the narrator may...
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    Thank you both Ehimtims and tonywalt. Glad to...

    Thank you both Ehimtims and tonywalt. Glad to meet those who can relate
  16. Jerry, you have written many good ones, and will...

    Jerry, you have written many good ones, and will continue to do so.

    Not all in life is beautiful, some of it is the complete opposite. Neither one or the other all the time, guess what matters is...
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    Written To Death

    My love

    hurts.

    Its pain
    written by fingers
    quilled to sharp points,
    recklessly dipped,
    into the soft spaces
    of a wounded heart.
  18. Thread: effortless

    by Shadowlight
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    I will be looking forward in anticipation your...

    I will be looking forward in anticipation your next offering. SL
  19. Thread: effortless

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    Have you ever considered following a more fluid...

    Have you ever considered following a more fluid metered rhyme scheme?

    Not to be abrasive, but I find that this rhyme is so staccato in the way it reads that it feels like my mind is tripping over...
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    Thank you Tailor Stately for your thorough and...

    Thank you Tailor Stately for your thorough and honest review. I have cleaned up the syntax errors and have attempted to try to rework some of the meter and rhymes. Hopefully, this offers a more...
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    Thank you Tailor Stately for your thorough and...

    Thank you Tailor Stately for your thorough and honest review. I have cleaned up the syntax errors and have attempted to try to rework some of the meter and rhymes. Hopefully, this offers a more...
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    The Wild One

    The little girl wandered out of the village square
    in the moonlight of the night she climbed its walls.
    She avoided the paths that led specifically anywhere,
    that night she answered the...
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    Remnant Goodbye

    "Im always going to love you."
    She spoke a truth more permanent than any promise.
    Her hair blew upon the wind,
    gossamer knitted into the last strands of sunset.
    A silhouette of two souls...
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    Eye of the Storm

    The sky became broken
    and the Earth began to quake.
    Tethered for an instant
    lightning shared between them
    Heaven and Earth.

    You could see,
    so easily,
    that which stone was supposed to keep....
  25. Thread: Hell Carny

    by Shadowlight
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    Dang, this is well-written! Incredible story...

    Dang, this is well-written! Incredible story telling here! Reminds me just of the old tales that an old village would tell for Halloween.
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