Happy birthday to you!
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Happy birthday to you!
Thanks Bar22do for your comment.:)
Thanks Nikolail.:)
Thankyou Delta40!
That is a good thing to do. It is, however, too hot to do anything because I start sweating like mad. To top it all, load-shedding is driving me crazy! Air conditioners seem like a distant dream.:-)
Ah, freedom to go insane! Just as I say:
They call him insane,
But he just explains,
That unlike them,
He hates formality!
I liked ur poem.
Thanks JB.
Thanks Pensive!:-)
Look inside
It's in my veins,
Deep down,
Beneath my skin,
Pushing hard,
To make its way,
Burning me,
On its way
Stabbing me,
With its filthy stride
Thanks AuntShecky and JB for your comments.
It's simple and has a nice ring to it.
How can they cancel our vacations this early? How do they expect us to focus in this scorching heat?
Thanks Bar22do.
Thanks everyone for reading it.
I like the theme of your poem.
I like the flow of your poem and the idea is good too.
I think science has a bit of a clue but I haven't found it satisfactory. I ,too, think that it is a mystery but I believe it won't stay for long. Science will come up with a more convincing...
I like your poem. You sure have a way with words! Quite nice indeed.
Love the way you lie~ eminem
I enjoyed reading IT and Carrie but I haven't read Green Mile yet. I will definitely look for it.
I myself don't like the fake coolness. It almost feels like as if it's piercing your bones.
It was the same old pavement,
And the same old July
We were the same old birds,
Searching the same old sky
My heart was the same old traitor,
Felt the same old fire
I heard the same old tune...
Well that's a good idea! I'll look for one.
It's a really nice piece of poetry!
I love the last line, it beautifully closes the poem!