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wow....its really good

I translated this piece from Afrikaans to English, so please excuse any grammatical errors and such, enjoy :)


In contradiction to her mood, which were light and sunny, the day broke grey and...

Wow thats really nie :)

I guess the idea sprang to mind because we did some E.E Cummings at school. It was fun writing it though, it was something totally new for me writing that way and its cool :D

well thats the idea :) the words looks like the thoughts or sth like that in anyway

I could try...I'll see if I can figure it out...thanks for the idea :)

It was just changed..almost gave me a heart attack...I think(and I hope I'm right) that this is for general writings, not poetry, but its just a guess so it might be wrong

Its supposed to be all jambled up...lines starting in different places, some lines written backwards etc, but I cant get it that way in that post :( And that really contributed to the overall feel...

I like this :) :banana: (Though I almost thought the personal poetry section was removed lol)

This is an English essay, the title, "The real me, as confided in a psychiatryst" (my spelling...

blah this is not coming out right at all :(

I hope this comes out right lol.


All jumbled up
As I’m sitting here,
Listening to the singing of the rain
My thoughts wander to you.
I envision your perfect beauty
My thoughts
...

my name is just a very good description of me.


@simon...wasnt the boy who burned in LOTF nameless? and simon the one who was killed byt the rest of the boys?


or were you making a joke and I...

my only new years resolution is to have only one new years resolution

Thanks for the replies :)
Oh I dont have that much on my mind to talk about now...I guess I'll just look around and post on various places for now.
Not much going on here in South Africa... I got...

There are days when I
just want to break down and cry
get rid off the sadness and pain
I want to unwrap all these bandages
I put up to protect myself
Then I might maybe
Reach the person I...

Sorry, I expressed myself poorly.
I meant a totally other website, not the poetry section on here, sorry for the confusement, I enjoy reading and posting in the personal poetry section.

I've been registered at this site for a while now, but so far I've mostly posted in the personal poetry section. Now I'm lookin gfor a new forum to post and chat in, because I'm very disappointed in...

I like the idea

Do you realise what you can be girl
So far others built you up
To break you down
You can be so much
But you gave your all to
Others who threw it back in your face.

You can be the best
How...

I don't have a name for the poem yet...ideas will be appreciated :)

They say yesterday lies in the past
forever
They say you can never change yesterday
but I know...
today is built on...

:(
made me think off my cat that died

another murder
another bomb
why are we not shocked
why do we only shake our heads
and say such is life
another dead hostage
another raped baby
why is this normal
why do we close our eyes...

Why would I mind
I’ve been through worse
Why would I mind if you forget me
You are only my best friend
The one person who I would expect…
No seriously why would I mind
Everyone else forgets me...

I wrote it for someone for someone else :)

The sadness envelopes me
around me there is only silence
I wish I could be with you now
stare into those big bright eyes

The blanket of gloom refuses to let me go
without you my life is...