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  1. Thread: The Parts Falling

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    Hi Trummy, like you I don't have much experience...

    Hi Trummy, like you I don't have much experience in writing but keen to learn so don't even feel qualified to give feedback on your writing. Will leave that to the fantastic community here. Just...
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    Really enjoyed the story. I lecture at a...

    Really enjoyed the story. I lecture at a University in the UK and found myself mentally walking into the urinals, looking in the mirror...walking out on the car park and calling into the local...
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    Great feedback EvoWarrior5, taking it all on...

    Great feedback EvoWarrior5, taking it all on board, big thanks.

    You made me realise I'm rushing to get what's in my head, out in type. Going to and take a bit longer in production, apply the...
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    The letters of L O V E

    Have so many stories in my head and trying to develop a writing style to get them out and the confidence to write more. Many thanks to all who read......all thoughts and feedback gratefully received...
  5. Thread: Who are You?

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    Free and Sido, thank you for your comments. They...

    Free and Sido, thank you for your comments. They came just at the right time for me. I thought my writing was poorly received and couldn't motivate myself to write more.

    You have made me think...
  6. Thread: Who are You?

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    Who are You?

    Many thanks to all who read. All feedback appreciated....
  7. Thread: Raven on the rope

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    Thanks F.E Michael, glad you enjoyed the story. I...

    Thanks F.E Michael, glad you enjoyed the story. I have now taken on board the advice and worked it up into a 15,000 word short story and published it on Amazon Kindle (Raven on the Wire by Edgar...
  8. Thread: Silent Killer

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    Silent Killer

    Another offering, many thanks for reading...all feedback appreciated...
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    Thanks for the questions, really helpful. "We...

    Thanks for the questions, really helpful.

    "We could murder one" is a local way of saying " We really really want one" ......(local to the UK, central at least)

    In my mind, they were working so...
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    Many thanks for the feedback folks. I have tried...

    Many thanks for the feedback folks. I have tried to tighten it up a bit and add more info to the meaning at the end in line with your feedback. Please do let me know your thoughts. ...
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    Being deaf can be cool

    Another offering .....many thanks for reading. All critique most welcome. Thanks everyone...
  12. Thread: The Choice

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    Many thanks for the feedback. I think the advice...

    Many thanks for the feedback. I think the advice of coming back to it later is particularily appropriate as perhaps I have been rushing to get the next thing out as quick as poss. Will be applying...
  13. Thread: The Choice

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    The Choice

    Thank you for the very detailed feedback on my recent first writing attempt (Raven on the Rope). I have tried to put the advice into practice in the short story below. I would love to hear comments...
  14. Thread: Raven on the rope

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    Many thanks for the detailed feedback on my piece...

    Many thanks for the detailed feedback on my piece

    Being the first thing I have wrote, your detailed and prompt feedback is pure gold and I am scrutinising every comment and incorporating your...
  15. Thread: Raven on the rope

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    Raven on the rope

    First time here who has finally summoned up the courage to write something. Really appreciate feedback and many thanks for reading...
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