Thank you Melanie. I must have done something right as this lady never existed. It was based off of research I was doing for Multiple Sclerosis and how it slowly steals the life from its victims. ...
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Thank you Melanie. I must have done something right as this lady never existed. It was based off of research I was doing for Multiple Sclerosis and how it slowly steals the life from its victims. ...
Thank you WolfLarsen for your kinds words. It needs work and perhaps soon I will have some time to tidy it up. Thank you for the read and comment!
Kittypaws
Oddly enuf this came from a tussle of two dogs in The Dpk.
It is a rough draft and i know I should refine it more but time doesn't allow for that.
Just thought I would post and see what anyone has...
Albay I liked it. Very creative writing.
Sounds to me like you wrote about a dream.
You took a different turn on this. You made something that is wonderful into something that causes...
Hello Janice,
I know a number of writers who start but don't finish their writes. Many people get stuck in the thinking but not doing phase, and that’s not good because your goals won’t magically...
I saw no link included......?
i have returned to blogging....if anyone is interested.
Billy The Kid
Ahhhh.. Melanie ~ You are too kind in your comment! But I love it!!!!
You may be onto something with the last dance. I never listen to Garth Brooks but it seems like we are on the same thought. ...
HELLO Delta!!!
I miss You! Seriously I do. I'm not much of a poet but watch for my blogs as I hope to have the time for them...I do miss writing but my main interest lies in photography..
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{{{{ HUGZ }}}} back to you, Bar!!
I will try to revisit the last stanza.....and yes you are right....I was rushing it cuz I wanted to create a loneliness that would end....sigh...trying too hard...
Thanks for the read and comment NikolarI....LOST was a weak title...just how I felt at the moment.
RMH....(raise my hand ~ changing subject) what does your name mean? PM me if you find that more...
Hi YesNo.....the trauma is that I grew older....Aggggg! I hate to say it cuz I still have sooooo much life and beauty in me, at least through my eyes; and as far as I am concerned those are the ones...
To run your fingers thru golden
Stroke skin so fair and soft
To cherish a spirit so bright.
To dance within the heavens
Laughter within the heart
Two souls meld into one.
To live life...
Hey Delta!!!
I just re-appeared here again....we must be on the same magic carpet! :)
I hope You are well.
You poem spoke lots to moi as they always do.
Lost of a (your) dad and many...
Animal Farm by George Orwell.
Outside my window it is snowing and expecting many inches more...but for now it is prefect..
I sit and watch
with still breath
the snow as it covets
the evergreens,
with winter.
the air...
The Polar Voltex has subsided for the weekend and you no longer see your breath in front of your nose. All of the snow has turned to mud and I thought I heard a bird singing this morning. Tomorrow...
I bet it was Delta! Wish I had been there to see it.
Happy New Year to you as well dear Friend!
Kittypaws
thank you Qim....You are a kind soul and perhaps one day I will take you up on the offer!!!:smile5:
I enjoyed it up to the end but then I felt like you rushed it too much. Michelle gets handed a book with the words: for my big sister, my hero - that a detective present to her and from there we are...
Thank you for the read and comment Delta. No the writer is not over 75, she is just lonely. This time of year brings much emptiness to those without family and it just reflects how I feel.
The last quarter.
As the season wears
I find myself
Falling deeper in despair.
Far away my mind
And spirit drifts
Sucked in by
Solitude and emptiness.
No noise, no response
Windy...temperatures are dropping....outside my window is a great night for viewing twinkling stars!
I luv the night skies! So peaceful yet so full of life.
And your trees still have leaves!
Great images GG! You captured the feeling of cold and nature so well.
Hope you are warm soon.
Outside my window is has been mild for this time of year but...