Hi Sandman,
Thank you for the critique. I'll bear that in mind and improve ^^
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Hi Sandman,
Thank you for the critique. I'll bear that in mind and improve ^^
Thank you very much prince, for your comment :)
I've seen 'em in movie and bright lights,
the way romance novels often get them right.
The girl swirls gently, her hand near her face,
while the man holds her like a fortress often 'round the...
2. The repetition of "One hundred years later" creates a sense of rigidity due to the lack of variation in the description of duration. Thus reflecting rigidity in the political scene as well as the...
Hi pardon me for my lack of understanding, but who is the persona addressing?
Is it "daydreaming,musings and castle in the air"? Haha, sorry if I sound absurd, but thats what i thought of and I...
Immersion.
Love's philosophy is my favourite as well :)
One aspect of his magnificence is his choice of rhyming diction, perfect and harmonious.
I just don’t know what is life worth anymore. I’m empty as can be. Why do I feel sorrow so deep when I’m living my life pretty much like everyone else? Do I think too much? Even my passion fails to...
Who shall speak to my soul in this lonely hour?
Love has thus turned into a stranger.
Some claim that silence begets strength and power,
it too has brought me solitude's slumber.
He would say, "That takes nothing from the poor."
Les Miserables - Victor Hugo
Hi Kelby, thank you for your info, i'll consider that in one of the section of my magazine :)
Hey Caleb, those examples you provided sure are beautiful judging from the covers and webdesign...
Hi Jermac,
Great to hear that your magazine is going up strong and kicking.
I think I might have been unclear, but just to clarify: mine's going to be just a submission for my school's...
Hi Jermac, thank you for your numerous warnings but I am prepared to bring forth the time,effort and money for this project otherwise I would not have chosen this particular content :)
It would be...
Hi Jermac,
The production would be a mini one, because of the duration of the module we do not have that much time to do a complete magazine. But nevertheless the challenge will be great :D
So...
Good Day to All,
I am currently doing an advanced diploma in Advertising due to my aspiration to become a copywriter.
At the moment, I am given a task to produce a magazine(editorial module)...
Good day cogs! Thank you for your interest in the poem.
Yeah the "sit" issue is definitely my mistake of wrong diction.
The reference of the shuttle and the flag was made from Neil Armstrong's...
Hi MorpheusSandman, thanks for your opinion!
I just began writing poetry. The poem was written one night when I felt really heavy to do anything else.
Even when one strives to remain POSITIVE...
A mortal cries amidst his struggles,
a numbing flame searing his existence.
The ashes left are like the emptiness left,
wondering what has his life burnt.
His soul is vast like the universe,...
I am sure most of the guys here know regarding the power of thought.
The ability to influence reality through thinking.
Simple example: The Armstrong guy who had cancer despite his comebacks and...
Hi there blaze,
I do not claim that I am able to provide an answer for your ultimate question but I saw something interesting in your contemplation that I would like to point out; If noise do not...
It could have been that all the beautiful things you experienced, all the creations you marveled, have been the same.
One may call it God, while others may call it Planet-as-it-is, but why put...
But without inequality, who would appreciate about equality?
Similarly, peril makes us cherish life and self-centeredness of others teaches us the greatness of selflessness.
I believe in...