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    well for me it would have looked better...

    well for me it would have looked better addressed like this:

    '''dear mom and dad''
    without a comma in between mom/dad.

    this way 'dad' does not come across as though excluded or second choice...
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    the topic of suicide I do not take lightly...

    the topic of suicide I do not take lightly however I would like to add something if I may:

    the letter starts:

    dear mom , dad & everyone else

    a) there is a comma after mom? it comes across to...
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