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hahaha one good thing about efudix - can't look any redder than I already am - and yes I was definitely posting a compliment - too much refinement can make a man look fruity haha.
but yeah I was...

Hi MAN
well firstly I'M BACK... from the darkness of backwards and beyond - a stint in medullary Australia where the sun burns blue and your skin follows suit.

Now being back and wading through...

Mani.... c'mon, Job is humorous... don't you find it funny that the devil made it his 'job' to destroy a man named 'Job' so much that he would denounce his faith and curse God?

Humorous indeed -...

that is a fair point Mani. primary prevention is always better than a cure.

But my point is that a lot of doctors don't understand the difference between 'relevant' social history, and useless...

^^ well aristotle said our jobs as physicians 'was the human body' so I figure that's alright - hell you find some interesting stuff when you poke around haha - trust me I have the Abdo xray's to...

you certainly may call me Doc if you like.

didn't know brits like cordial too? (that was a joke, a lame one I know)

I didn't think you would be offended, you seem too level headed for...

I feel amazingly superfluous

^ tinkerbell would rock your world H

but back to the poem... I actually enjoyed it... I did keep skipping the repetitive stanza though - got old quick.

but apart from that - found it more...

hahaha in that case.... BRAVO!!

I enjoyed it a lot... was hoping all the scientific mis-'usage' (for want of a better term) was a poke at current scientific beliefs vs Folklore.... I particularly...

Marchen genes? is that meant to be a parody on the german term for 'folktales' (clever if I do say so myself - I knew that having a german friend would come in handy). cause firstly I have never...

It is ok,
like Delta pointed out, some various problems with tense, which is easily enough fixed.

The main problem I have is the atmosphere doesn't build up, it is kind of bland. Now a lot of...

hahahahaha!!!
That was great!
did you see a gp? cause that is exactly a GP consultation - 3mins in and out - followed by 'that will be a quizillion dollars please'.
I do find it quite humorous...

The author has much skill. The reader is pleased to read this authors work.

Mate, you turned my skin to cactus, hairs on end. I think most writers/authors can relate to such an alienation, their...

ahh dear friend... Hunley and you are by far my most treasured of story tellers on this forum. you are definitely favored gems I have been pleasantly surprised to come across.

This tale is...

I had to read this a couple of times. first time was to get the overall picture. so let us firstly discuss that. The story is firm, it is presented logically and is intriguing. Hell, it was good...

Thanks Manichaean,

I'm glad I was able to bring the emotion out. It was actually really quite difficult for me to apply emotion to it. As a Dr I see it all the time, in fact you become numb to it....

So here we go, something I've been tinkering around with. definitely a different type of story I usually write.


I Hadn't Noticed
Written by Loki456

'I hadn't noticed', the phrase seemed to...

hey no worries - I wrote something a few weeks back if you want to check it out - like you, I love the criticism, you need to if you want to keep going from strength to strength. Don't take anything...

ok a few things - sorry I'm flying out soon, so i'll be quick.

'please give me, tammy a call.....' grammatically sounds off, she should have started with her name, like a normal person. something...

this book is unbelievable, read it back in grade 10 and still am quoting lines from it. It is definitely a personal like or dislike, depending on tastes. But I can tell you, I laughed so hard, it was...

haha prison break anyone?

I liked it - brotherly love - I know I would do anything for my brother. You portrayed the emotion very well.

one thing I picked up at the start was,

Given the...

haha alcala - you sure have a flare to this type of style - well done.

I liked some of the phrases you used - provoked some good imagery - eg 'shot Richard down with it's brightest beams' - felt like the sun had donned a berret and ak and went all Rambo on richard's...

definitely interesting observation cat square.

sorry it's taken me so long to reply to this thread - been busy, busy, busy.

'with fun as the object' - i'm having trouble with this, as it seems...

So decided to make this my first comment since i've been away for the last couple of weeks. and I was pleasantly surprised.
it was Interesting.
I liked it.
the conversation didn't at all seemed...