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  1. Okay, this is the follow-up to the short story...

    Okay, this is the follow-up to the short story posted in this thread. Similarly to before, please give any feedback.

    Ever since my grandfather had told me the story regarding the ‘Doctors’ he...
  2. Thank you for the feedback Danik 2016! The...

    Thank you for the feedback Danik 2016! The changes have been made.
  3. I'm sorry to hear that Dreamwoven, but thank you...

    I'm sorry to hear that Dreamwoven, but thank you for your feedback.
  4. This is my first draft, feedback is appreciated :)

    “All this happened, more or less.”
    “Are you sure, Grandpa?” I yawned. No reply. I looked up at him with drowsy eyes and a weary expression on my face, only to observe him quietly drifting off into a...
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    Sticky: Hello everyone, Being a new member, just...

    Hello everyone,

    Being a new member, just wanted to introduce myself to the community and say 'hi' :)
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    Okay guys (and gals), here is the second...

    Okay guys (and gals), here is the second paragraph to my short story:

    "By 5:53 a.m., I was still exhausted, but began to raise myself out of bed and onto the floor; being cautious to not step on...
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    Thanks for the suggestion Jason! Just wondering...

    Thanks for the suggestion Jason! Just wondering though, where do you (or anyone else for that matter) believe I should include more 'powerful' words within the paragraph?
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    Can Someone Help Me Edit My Short Story?

    First and Foremost: This is my first post, so I'm sorry if I'm posting in the wrong space or I'm positing something irrelevant to the forums in general.

    Anyways...I've started writing a short...
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