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  1. Thread: Wanting

    by Jonfischer
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    I like this. Very vivd imagery; particularly the...

    I like this. Very vivd imagery; particularly the first two lines.
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    America, Circa Infinity

    Another short story I recently wrote. Tried to make this one more cohesive in hopes it would flow better together. Any feedback is appreciated.






    I do remember. Yes.
    The sonic blast was...
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    Thanks, man. I appreciate the feedback.

    Thanks, man. I appreciate the feedback.
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    To be honest, I just think of ideas and then try...

    To be honest, I just think of ideas and then try to run with them; however they sometimes end up causing more harm than good in my stories. Is there anything I can work on? Anything to take out?
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    Frog with the Red Dot

    Hi everyone, I'm Jonathan. I enjoy writing mostly short stories and poetry. However I do find it difficult to write a short story from start to finish and have it be cohesive, and have it not somehow...
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