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thanks Riesa!

I want to know if haiku should have only 5-7-5 lines
or may have other ?
is his essence refered to nature or descriptive situations ?

thanks RobinHood3000.....!!!!! for helping this "poor lady" ;)

Gacela del amor imprevisto (F.García Lorca)

Nadie comprendía el perfume
de la oscura magnolia de tu vientre.
Nadie sabía que martirizabas
Un colibrí de amor entre los dientes.

Mil...

I translated this poem of F Garcia Lorca from spanish to english. I want to know if the ideas are transfered correctly.....please comment!

Gazelle of the sudden love

Nobody understood the...

a freezer is dead
something has happened here
though I cannot say

The time has come
to leave,
there are only some
hours left.

the time has passed
like the sound of the wind
before the rain;
like my steps
on the stones

nice poem!!!!

your poem is sad but beautiful.....

I undersatand what you mean in your poem Ricardo, it is very strong, and true as life......you transfer very well your intention......I like it.

the essence of your poem is very interesting.....may be you used too many metaphors .....I like it.!

The glance

The sentences are tired,
abused.
they are broken by the noises
around,
they hit the walls and slip down


You stare at me,

gracias volvoreta.....!

I like this....



I'm a target but have no aim,
A propeller without a plane.
I'm the sun but never shine,
A clock without the time.
I'm the wind but I never blow,
I'm a flower that doesn't...

Yes, I agree.....it is lovely!

yes.......i am not satisfied with poco a poco either
maay be
tu avanzas y avanzas
o
tu avanzas por inercia
o
tu avanzas lentamente
o
te arrastras adelante

to spanish.....
may be it is
tu avanzas poco a poco

thank you subterranean.....you re so kind..... :nod:

once the wind stops talking to you
once the leafs leave the trees
and the rain stops beating you down
you drag forward, on, and, on

I am translating this so, Please tell me what is the...

I agree Scheherazade with your second explanation......thank you... :)

please go and tell me what is your favourite......

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I dont think thaat something beautiful for someone may be horrifying for other...there is a certain pattern that appeals everybody but we do not know how to define that. the external beauty that...

you are sweet.....thank you ....

I need a beautiful short love poem or some love quotes!
:flare:

Nice poem Isagel!