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    A nest on my mind

    I came
    for remembrance
    Roots of love deep in the earth
    A moment of silence
    between death and birth

    You departed
    for the next journey
    Bird of eternity up in the sky
    Echo of tranquility
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    I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. As for...

    I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.

    As for the definite article "the" in "between the two worlds", you really pointed out something interesting. I hesitated whether to use it when I was writing...
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    The rain of hope

    A dropping withered leaf
    at the moment touching the ground of coldness
    in silence
    ruffled up by the wind
    spinning in the air
    fell again
    Where is the place of settlement?

    A world with no...
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    A melody between the two worlds

    When he becomes old
    He will still pray for you
    In the sunset
    he is merely
    an unnoticeable grass blade

    In the moonlight and starlight
    who would enjoy the dance of the fireflies?
    No one...
  5. Thread: Spring Leaf

    by lh33334
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    The third possibility is that the "author" is in...

    The third possibility is that the "author" is in between the first and the second situations, is still in sadness but longing to see the bright side of the future.
    And now I tend towards this...
  6. Thread: Spring Leaf

    by lh33334
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    The last two lines would imply two opposite...

    The last two lines would imply two opposite meanings:
    1. the one I interpreted above, the "author" got out of the sadness and saw the brightness of life and hope.

    2. another possible effect is...
  7. Thread: Spring Leaf

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    The gorgeous scene created by the last two lines...

    The gorgeous scene created by the last two lines drew me to the first line and I started reading, line by line, until the end.

    " I sit, lonely and sad like a spring leaf "
    I am not sure if...
  8. Words between this world and the hereafter

    The most beautiful poem
    is written on the water
    Ripples under the moon
    are full of gentle mystery

    The truest love
    is engraved in the rock
    Heat waves and sandstorm
    are blowing the robe of the...
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    yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.

    yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.
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    thanks for your comment. Sorry for posting it...

    thanks for your comment.
    Sorry for posting it in the wrong section. I am new on this forum and didn't realize there is a section called "personal proetry" until I posted it.
    Can someone move this...
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    Petals of early spring

    Petals of early spring
    strewn on the vast of loneliness

    Hope of deep winter
    hidden in the soul of profoundness

    You
    are always on my mind
    like a moon shining in my sky
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