Hello Pompey and thank you for the interesting feedback.
I get exactly what you mean by the assonance of
own/orn/awn
I may need to rework it perhaps.
Glad you are posting again!! :)
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Hello Pompey and thank you for the interesting feedback.
I get exactly what you mean by the assonance of
own/orn/awn
I may need to rework it perhaps.
Glad you are posting again!! :)
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the very essence
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