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    They Found Your Phone

    They found your phone
    By the river where we’d searched for you
    The screen cracked in abstract violence

    Mum slowly thumbs the face
    As if to coax out an Avatar
    From a universe, back-lit
    And...
  2. Thread: The Abstract Home

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    The language flows so well, especially stanza...

    The language flows so well, especially stanza two. The refrain with all those imperatives really amplifies those conflicting emotions. The sense of boundless possibility and nothingness at the same...
  3. Thread: Heroin

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    thank you.

    thank you.
  4. Thread: Heroin

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    I was not advocating drugs by any means by...

    I was not advocating drugs by any means by starting this thread

    And simply observing from a highly sanitized analyitical perspective.

    And i do not intend to glamorize their usage or trick some...
  5. I think the Issue here is Consciousness, not...

    I think the Issue here is Consciousness, not Existence.
  6. not higgs bosons by the looks of things. maybe...

    not higgs bosons by the looks of things.
    maybe they only get basic rights
  7. Thread: Click!

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    In fact i might even do a Verse-ectomy and turn...

    In fact i might even do a Verse-ectomy and turn it into a song
  8. Thread: Click!

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    haha. I know. that clangs when i read it back. ...

    haha. I know. that clangs when i read it back.

    I was in a rush to finish it and , to an extent, just lobbed some anti-utilitarian cliches in.

    But thanks for the criticism.
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    Thats powerful stuff And i really like the way...

    Thats powerful stuff

    And i really like the way its set out almost as prose without punctuation.
    it forces you to read it slowly and interpret your own breaks
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    Thanks a lot, pen. Yeah i agree, i think i was...

    Thanks a lot, pen. Yeah i agree, i think i was probably trying a little too hard to get a heroic couplet at the end.

    I think your idea would give it a much more conclusive ending.

    Thanks again
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    anyone?

    anyone?
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    Im sure that suicide was only demonised by...

    Im sure that suicide was only demonised by Dante's inferno,
    Which was, we must remember, rejected by the church immediately after publication

    His metaphorical representation of Hell has however...
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    Ive also located some Youtube Videos that are...

    Ive also located some Youtube Videos that are rather beautiful if you do not own the tracks

    Stone In Focus

    Sombre Reptiles
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    Competition (ish) : Music and Poetry

    I have convinced myself that if this thread can resucitated before it ends up on the second page of posts, it could provide some very interesting results

    Simply Post a poem composed whilst being...
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    Wow. 516 pages of beautiful imagery and...

    Wow. 516 pages of beautiful imagery and abstraction.
    Not your usual post.
  16. Thread: Atheists....

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    Poll: Slightly irrelevant, but on the poll above...

    Slightly irrelevant, but on the poll above doesn't being "not sure" whether you're an Atheist or not make you, by definition, Agnostic?
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    Well i apologise for contributing to your...

    Well i apologise for contributing to your considerable workload.
    But i would really value your opinion on this (it's rough around the edges) :


    Through urban attraction, we become one
    Like fag...
  18. Thread: Click!

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    Click!

    I'm sorry for the shameless method i used to get you to wander here,
    But there is a poem i have made that I would like construed


    Through urban attraction, we become one
    Like fag ends trod in...
  19. Thread: Heroin

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    Personally (lifestyle aside) i actually do really...

    Personally (lifestyle aside) i actually do really like Pete Doherty's work, and the hostility above is really just to try and influence some sort of response/debate in a viral marketing kind of way....
  20. Thread: Novel endings?

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    I love the ending to Yann Martel's Life of Pi....

    I love the ending to Yann Martel's Life of Pi. even though it is quite drawn out the revelation of the animals as a metaphor is extremely thought provoking
  21. Thread: Heroin

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    Heroin

    i know this is a musical/lyrical thread but i am interested (and i don't know how you look upon lyrics in comparison with "pure poetry")

    I recently heard for the first time the velvet underground...
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    Thanks i have tried to avoid coming across as...

    Thanks
    i have tried to avoid coming across as complaining about the book, as in actual fact the conclusion and development within the story i found to be over the long term very rewarding. I just...
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    . Hard times? (Dickens) .

    I am currently reading this novel (for school) and can acknowledge that the book, in accordance to it's theme and context within industrialised Britain, emphatically emphasises the monotony and lack...
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