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    Ode to Death

    Death,oh Death,Come for me
    In frozen fields I wait for you.
    Please never leave me be...
    This world is so untrue.

    Death,sweet Death,please come to me
    I know you will not let me down
    Here I...
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    Ode to death

    Death,oh Death,Come for me
    In frozen fields I wait for you.
    Please never leave me be...
    This world is so untrue.

    Death,sweet Death,please come to me
    I know you will not let me down
    Here I...
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    Come into this night…

    A chill settles upon the land
    But do not let it into your heart,
    Do not let your life become bland,
    Do not let us grow apart.
    A chill settles upon the land
    But do not...
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    Where dream blends with reality

    Where dream blends with reality

    I go to sleep late at night
    I cuddle you to sleep in my arms.
    There is something magical in this sight
    And there is nothing disturbing, nothing that alarms
    My...
  5. Thread: ***

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    ***

    This is the final scene in my tragic play -
    Pain and sorrow written on my face.
    My soul,my sanity - they fade away,
    And my heart - so cold.It is such a dark place
    Place now full only of sin and...
  6. Thread: Frozen

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    Frozen

    This is some experimental flow of counsiosness, I'm new to it so please don't judge me too hard, but I'd love to see some criticism so I can improve myself :smilewinkgrin:

    In cold rain,snow and...
  7. Thread: Time

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    I appreciate your comment, dara, and I am glad...

    I appreciate your comment, dara, and I am glad that you find my poem motivating and in a sence - touching
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    thank you very much cician, I value your...

    thank you very much cician, I value your oppinion, but I wonder if I had made it all clear or I have too much symbols
  9. Thread: Time

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    I wrote this one for a contest in school, and the...

    I wrote this one for a contest in school, and the rules were that we had to use exactly 40 words, no more and no less.Thank you for the responce anyway :D
  10. Thread: Time

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    Time

    I opened my eyes and I saw a rose,
    red and warm, but I did not care.
    I turned around, and saw brownish fields
    with bitter blowing winds and yellow mists…
    And a lonely man, holding something -...
  11. Thread: Emptiness

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    well,about the fowl, it is a mistake I didn't...

    well,about the fowl, it is a mistake I didn't see, it was supposed to be foul, and about the sparrow, I have contemplated them for many years in my home country and noticed that they stay together,...
  12. Thread: Emptiness

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    That is the point of the whole poem - the man is...

    That is the point of the whole poem - the man is no longer in control of his own life, after her he is empty,hollow, and he waits for the only thing that can save him from the sorrow which is...
  13. Thread: Emptiness

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    Emptiness

    I watch you and I feel a pain.
    I dream a realm in a sleep insane.
    My heart feels like a sparrow,
    after you I always follow.
    My life is just so sour,
    'cuz I know what's coming - my final hour....
  14. Thread: Oblivion

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    Oblivion

    I would like if I get some feedback, either possitive or negative, so I could improve myself and my poetry.

    The night is black and creepy,
    The night is cold as death’s embrace.
    And liquid iron...
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    Oblivion

    Sorry,wrong forum indeed
  16. Thread: Nevermore

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    Nevermore

    This one is a school assignment of mine,inspired by "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe.

    Nevermore
    The night is black and creepy,
    The night is cold as death’s embrace.
    I stand alone and dwell .So...
  17. Thread: Embrace

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    I really appreciate that you enjoed my poem, and...

    I really appreciate that you enjoed my poem, and thank you about the support Buh4Bee
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    I hope that people will leave their constructive...

    I hope that people will leave their constructive feedback,so I can improve myself.
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    Thank you very much cacian,I appreciate it.

    Thank you very much cacian,I appreciate it.
  20. Thread: Embrace

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    Embrace

    One night I saw her coming towards me
    Her eyes, her hair dazzling
    With a mysterious luminescence.
    Benevolent towards me
    She appeared to care
    For my griefs long forgotten
    By the people I...
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    Ok, so the first question - the night is disloyal...

    Ok, so the first question - the night is disloyal because normally the weak and fragile creatures find refuge in it, but in this peace it betrayes the person, not giving him hideout. And about your...
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    Sleeping city

    The city sleeps in the silent absence of sun
    Of disloyal night – loyal son.
    Homeless and lone I keep walking on
    And the rain keeps pouring on, and on ,and on…
    By the black walls they sound,...
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    Civilization

    The city – an endless cycle of life
    Birth and death swirling into a dance.
    Sorrow and joy go as husband and wife
    Lost in their alluring romance.
    Fear and hope – world of contrast
    This is the...
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    Ok thank you and I am serious about it but I am...

    Ok thank you and I am serious about it but I am studying english for just a few years and my grammar and spelling are improving at the moment
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    Well thank you H so here another one but it's not...

    Well thank you H so here another one but it's not quite finished so don't judge too hard

    Eternity
    Your beauty is unrivaled I avow,
    For that I will grant you with my bow.
    But all took was just a...
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