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    I revised it. Added a lot more dialogue and...

    I revised it. Added a lot more dialogue and "showing". Hopefully it allows the reader to experience the story much more thoroughly now.
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    Wow I didn't expect this great of feedback! Thank...

    Wow I didn't expect this great of feedback! Thank you so much, both of you, I really appreciate the criticism :)
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    The Catholic Child

    The Catholic Child

    I always thought it queer when people referred to me as “the Catholic child”. I was only a five year old girl and even at that age it seemed a rather arrogant label to enslave...
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