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    I would like to add that I gleaned a few nuggets...

    I would like to add that I gleaned a few nuggets of knowledge from Hillwalker and co., but the more I submitted, the more I felt that the shortcomings in my stories were focused on without positive...
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    The anthology is called Stories on the Go. I...

    The anthology is called Stories on the Go. I received no pay for it, but I did not mind, since my story was joining dozens of others (this is an anthology of flash fiction, i.e. stories of 1,000...
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    Thank you. :-)

    Thank you. :-)
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    Jack of Hearts: Look at what you wrote. You...

    Jack of Hearts:

    Look at what you wrote. You are sounding like a classic internet bully now, not a writer.
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    Another thing: I was a slush reader for Every Day...

    Another thing: I was a slush reader for Every Day Fiction from the summer of 2013 to the spring of 2015. It was an invaluable learning experience, including how good short stories are written.
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    Improvement is important to me. As I noted above,...

    Improvement is important to me. As I noted above, I had a peer-reviewed short story published in an anthology last year. I listened to what my peers had to say because they were respectful and did...
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    Jack of hearts: I let writers who are more...

    Jack of hearts:

    I let writers who are more professional review my work for me now. In fact, I got a peer-vetted short story published in an anthology last year.
    I came to this forum expecting...
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    I bumped the thread because I felt my treatment...

    I bumped the thread because I felt my treatment here was borderline internet bullying. Whenever I provide feedback to an author, I always do it in a sensitive, respectful manner. Here a lot of people...
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    This story of mine remains scrapped. "This...

    This story of mine remains scrapped.

    "This was creepy - I'm not sure whether it's meant to be, but the narrator behaving like some deranged stalker was quite an original idea to come up with..."...
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    Varenne: To be completely honest, you were...

    Varenne:

    To be completely honest, you were always hypercritical re: my old romance attempts. I also felt your recommendations that I turn my boy meets girl, boy protects girl story into a "horror"...
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    FYI: the short story I published is a war story. ...

    FYI: the short story I published is a war story. The other stuff I wrote and posted here has eithier been scrapped entirely or is undergoing massive revision.

    Due to an excess of negativity...
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    Published At Last!!!!

    Hi all,

    While I've stopped sharing my stories here, I did want to drop back in with great news: it took an unconventional approach, but now -thanks to Lulu.com- the short story I posted and shared...
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    No way to delete membership?

    Never mind deleting, but I am done posting my fiction here. I'm going into "lurk" mode I think ...

    Its been fun, though! :-)
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    Unpleasant (Agnst/angry fiction)

    This has been removed due to the reason listed below.
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    I hate Norman Bates, Hill, and wish he had wound...

    I hate Norman Bates, Hill, and wish he had wound up on Dexter Morgan's table.

    I don't consider mom my "best friend", she's just ... mom. And there are times my mom drives me so nuts I give her...
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    This story is now down because of massive...

    This story is now down because of massive re-write issues your constructive feedback revealed. Thanks. :-)
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    (aside from the odd part where it seems too...

    (aside from the odd part where it seems too forced)

    Could you point that part out to me? Thanks.
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    Hill: So what if this was meant to be on...

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    So what if this was meant to be on "Planet Cussler", dude, but in a more subtle way?

    I'll grant this needs tweaking, but as a man, I am the first one to admit I can't get into a woman's...
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    Hillwalker: Could you please relax, sarge? ...

    Hillwalker:

    Could you please relax, sarge? Why does everything I write creep you out, man? Why oh why must you slam my stuff with the likes of "One is tempted to post a ‘Creep Alert’ at this...
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    Untitled (was "Skye's Shirt)

    Removed due to massive re-write issues.
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    Hmmmmm ... This is going back to the drawing...

    Hmmmmm ...

    This is going back to the drawing board big time.

    Thanks for the feedback, everybody. :smile5:
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    Varenne: You are correct this tale shows lack...

    Varenne:

    You are correct this tale shows lack of understanding of women. I sent you a PM explaining why because I'd rather keep the gory details off the boards here.

    Jack:

    Relax, dude. I'm...
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    Varenne: What if I give the girl in the above...

    Varenne:

    What if I give the girl in the above story a hint of mutual attraction? Would that drag it out of the "creepy" mud?
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    BTW: how come this romantic fable of mine did not...

    BTW: how come this romantic fable of mine did not stray into the "chick lit" area? Because it is so to the point and agnst-free?
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    A screaming irony here: I didn't study the "chick...

    A screaming irony here: I didn't study the "chick lit" genere at all before I wrote this!

    Seriously, my goal is for this to be a tale of true feeling suppressed until something ugly allows them to...
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