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Yeah, I love the it.

I think I'll have to re-read it soon.


Edit: thanks for the compliment ;)

Yeah. I got a little too excited when I posted the poll, but I got it closed.

If zombies aren't your thing, it's no problem.

and thanks c:


(didn't realize a second page of comments was...

Chapter 1 ending edited. (Not proof read well, I can't proof read my own work well :/ )

Chapter 2 deleted.

Thanks. I'll try messaging one.

Also, I have nothing against you putting no on the poll, I'm just removing it because I'm not thinking it's giving sufficient feedback.

Sorry if the story isn't...

Also, excuse me for being an ignoramus, but is there any way to remove the poll without starting another thread?

I've been trying to figure out how to do it since H brought it up, still haven't...

Yeah, good point with the tenses, they're one of the main things I'm going to watch for in proof reading. (of which I haven't done enough of)

I'll make it better as I go on, don't worry, and I'm...

By the time it's ready enough for me to even start thinking about it getting published it'll have been edited and corrected extensively.

What I have done will have to do for now, should I write...

Because the apocalypse won't be all zombie attacks and gun fights. He has to have some sort of daily ritual or schedule, all of which is interrupted at the end of the chapter. Which then leads up to...

Chapter 2 released. Dissect away.

This chapter is supposed to emphasize boredom and loneliness in the everyday life of a survivor.

Well, you might hate some parts of the second chapter, in the way I blatantly tell things over showing and describing them. (Which, for me, I think I tend to do a lot)

He does nothing but boring...

Also, if a part sounds odd, something is spelled incorrectly, or just doesn't sound right, post about it.

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Chapter 1

My name is Felix and I am alone in the dark... Except for Libby – my golden...