Very interesting, I found myself wanting to keep reading. Nice job!
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Very interesting, I found myself wanting to keep reading. Nice job!
Chapter 2 The orphanage
Raven plodded slowly behind Ms. Grumpky's clicking heels on the cobblestone pavement. Ahead of them stood in its Gothic glory, the demise of Raven's world. With every step...
"You need to stop and get ahold of yourself"
"I know, I know...but I can't help it, it just hurts so much"
"Pain is relative, everyone has to deal with it in their own way"
"Yes I know, but...
Thanks so much for the feedback, I will definitely revisit those paragraphs.
As for the "blue eyes". Not to give anything away...but they or more so who they belong to will be explained in the...
Thank you!!
I'm not a professional writer by any means, but I have a story in my head that I need to tell. I'm scared to death to post this, so please be gentle. Here's the first chapter, I hope someone enjoys...