I love the story that you have created and all the comparisons and details! The only feed back that I can think of giving is to maybe to a little less simple sentences. In my opinion it makes it a...
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I love the story that you have created and all the comparisons and details! The only feed back that I can think of giving is to maybe to a little less simple sentences. In my opinion it makes it a...
I love your use of dialogue and how even though you didn't give too much detail you can still picture the entire scenario! :)