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  1. Thread: A Friend of Mine

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    Hi Calidore! Thanks for the comments! I was sort...

    Hi Calidore! Thanks for the comments! I was sort of gunning for a different effect, like how some people can write things in a matter-of-fact way but still make their stories interesting. Anyhow, I...
  2. Thread: A Friend of Mine

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    A Friend of Mine

    "Have you ever thought about learning how to drive?" she asked me. She was leaning on the train door, hugging her laptop.

    "Hmm, not really," I said. "But I think it's a really useful skill, you...
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    I really liked this. :) It's down-to-earth and I...

    I really liked this. :) It's down-to-earth and I can relate to it.
  4. I like the idea of an 'independent author'. I...

    I like the idea of an 'independent author'. I know of someone who writes webserials and from readers' donations, he gets at least a thousand a month, according to his Patreon profile. Of course, his...
  5. Thread: Let's Draw

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    Let's Draw

    Hi LitNetters! It's been too long since I wrote anything other than essays. I couldn't think of a better title, and I didn't want to give anything away. Hopefully those who read this won't be able to...
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    Hi hypatia, I'm not sure if using 'that' is...

    Hi hypatia,

    I'm not sure if using 'that' is actually wrong, but it seems that it is usually not used. I found some examples from the Corpus of Contemporary American English (COCA): 9275.

    Hope...
  7. Yes, I think making readers empathise with your...

    Yes, I think making readers empathise with your character is the important thing. I read a webserial, Worm, by Wildbow. His main character, Taylor Herbert, ends up committing very violent acts, and...
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    Hi everyone, This seemed like the right place...

    Hi everyone,

    This seemed like the right place to ask this so... What is the difference in meaning between the words 'independence' and 'autonomy'? I came across the following line in a reading:
    ...
  9. Thread: Grae: Opener

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    I agree with Cal. I'm not the expert, but a good...

    I agree with Cal. I'm not the expert, but a good piece of advice I've heard lots of times is this: just write. Don't think too much. Just continue writing, then go back to it later and edit whatever...
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    Silver. Freedom or imagination?

    Silver.

    Freedom or imagination?
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    7740.

    7740.
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    Continued:

    The impact caused Jesse to drop the glass he was holding. It seemed to fall in tandem with his sister, shattering into tiny crystals that landed in a pool of water as Lily hit the floor, bleeding. ...
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    Something I'm working on:

    Hi. I've had an idea for a story for quite a while but never got down to writing it until recently. Critiques/comments are welcome; I'm kind of worried my descriptions aren't easy to follow, or that...
  14. Thread: Join Us

    by Lyn05
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    Join Us

    Come, come,
    Join us on this amazing adventure!
    All you have to do is
    Flip, flip
    the pages, as you have done before-
    the vestige of your fingers on those sheets tell no lies.
    Oh, don't you...
  15. Thread: Crash

    by Lyn05
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    Crash

    I remembered feeling upset because it had been my birthday, but Mom had bought Eric a gift too. I had gotten a beautiful patchwork teddy bear, made with denim and cloth with floral print. Eric, on...
  16. Thread: two poems

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    two poems

    Flower

    That yellow flower
    So small, frail, thin
    And dead.

    It's head, once adorned with
    succulent petals,
    now droops with a greyish hue
    shriveled up and dry,
  17. Thread: Please help!

    by Lyn05
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    Noted! And thank you so much for your time and...

    Noted! And thank you so much for your time and patience in correcting this!:D
  18. Thread: Please help!

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    Thank you, hill :) I was worried I was narrating...

    Thank you, hill :) I was worried I was narrating again.

    Here's a second attempt...


    The status quo is often determined by differences in wealth or racial identity, with the rich being seen to...
  19. Thread: Please help!

    by Lyn05
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    Please help!

    Hello! I’m currently preparing for my English Literature exam, but I have problems with producing quality work-sometimes I get it, sometimes I don’t. I often have the issue of “narration” as well....
  20. Thread: Escape

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    Thank you for your comments! I feel undeserving...

    Thank you for your comments! I feel undeserving of such praise but I'm glad you all enjoyed it.
  21. Thread: Escape

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    Escape

    Close your eyes and count to three
    Now take my hand and jump.
    We’ll dance across the lily pads,
    Counting as we go.
    We’ll watch rainbows form on stormy days
    And pick apples from the lemon trees....
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    I enjoyed it very much, though I found myself...

    I enjoyed it very much, though I found myself skipping some parts. Nonetheless, it's a really good piece, and you write way better than I do. Keep going!:)
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    Thank you both for commenting. And thank you...

    Thank you both for commenting. And thank you tailor, for your kind sugestion and ideas! I'll try to improve it. :)
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    On this afternoon

    I stare ahead,
    Watching the trees patronize the wind
    As they let their leaves move along with it
    But not releasing their firm grip on the soil beneath.
    The trees laugh a sound of coarse sand,...
  25. Thread: Forest Fires

    by Lyn05
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    Wow. I would definitely want to see more!:)

    Wow. I would definitely want to see more!:)
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