I came
for remembrance
Roots of love deep in the earth
A moment of silence
between death and birth
You departed
for the next journey
Bird of eternity up in the sky
Echo of tranquility
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I came
for remembrance
Roots of love deep in the earth
A moment of silence
between death and birth
You departed
for the next journey
Bird of eternity up in the sky
Echo of tranquility
I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.
As for the definite article "the" in "between the two worlds", you really pointed out something interesting. I hesitated whether to use it when I was writing...
A dropping withered leaf
at the moment touching the ground of coldness
in silence
ruffled up by the wind
spinning in the air
fell again
Where is the place of settlement?
A world with no...
When he becomes old
He will still pray for you
In the sunset
he is merely
an unnoticeable grass blade
In the moonlight and starlight
who would enjoy the dance of the fireflies?
No one...
The third possibility is that the "author" is in between the first and the second situations, is still in sadness but longing to see the bright side of the future.
And now I tend towards this...
The last two lines would imply two opposite meanings:
1. the one I interpreted above, the "author" got out of the sadness and saw the brightness of life and hope.
2. another possible effect is...
The gorgeous scene created by the last two lines drew me to the first line and I started reading, line by line, until the end.
" I sit, lonely and sad like a spring leaf "
I am not sure if...
The most beautiful poem
is written on the water
Ripples under the moon
are full of gentle mystery
The truest love
is engraved in the rock
Heat waves and sandstorm
are blowing the robe of the...
yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.
thanks for your comment.
Sorry for posting it in the wrong section. I am new on this forum and didn't realize there is a section called "personal proetry" until I posted it.
Can someone move this...
Petals of early spring
strewn on the vast of loneliness
Hope of deep winter
hidden in the soul of profoundness
You
are always on my mind
like a moon shining in my sky