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  1. Thanks. Glad you like it :)

    Thanks. Glad you like it :)
  2. Thank you :)

    Thank you :)
  3. Thanks!

    Thanks!
  4. Thanks! Hehe, I haven't been on litnet for ages...

    Thanks! Hehe, I haven't been on litnet for ages because I spend way too much time on Facebook and doing other nonsense. But after a weekend on literature forums and no Facebook, I feel so much more...
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    I like the confessional tone and vivid...

    I like the confessional tone and vivid descriptions. It's also interesting how you start to gradually reveal what happened. It makes me want to know more about what your/ the character's epiphany...
  6. Romance in the Decade of the Bark Beetle

    Feeling a bit cheeky asking for feedback because I hardly ever post any more, but I'm feeling rather pleased with this recent poem. Maybe we could do it like this:
    If you give me feedback, direct me...
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    Thanks :)

    Thanks :)
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    Thanks again :)

    Thanks again :)
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    Thanks! Eh, was that a pun?

    Thanks! Eh, was that a pun?
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    Thanks :) Haha, I'm glad you said that. A person...

    Thanks :) Haha, I'm glad you said that. A person on another forum got it completely wrong. For some reason they thought the poem was about drug trafficking in Hitler's time or something crazy like...
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    Thanks, good point about the semicolon; I've...

    Thanks, good point about the semicolon; I've changed that. But I'm not going to delete the other lines. They are fragments of memories, not just random phrases. I do understand that they wouldn't...
  12. YesNo, I've made some changes. Chasing...

    YesNo, I've made some changes.




    Chasing traces of your essence,
    I’m lost on google.
    You are lost,
    tailor-made rebel of the pre-Facebook age.
    When the bourgeois life gave us bourgeois...
  13. Thanks! I agree about some of those lines and...

    Thanks! I agree about some of those lines and have rewritten them. I can't post them right now, as I'm on my phone. Will post them in a bit from home.
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    Thanks. Yes, I need to come up with a better...

    Thanks. Yes, I need to come up with a better ending.
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    Thanks! Sorry, I only saw your reply now.

    Thanks!
    Sorry, I only saw your reply now.
  16. "Sonnet 18" - The Digital Divide (feedback?)

    ETA: There's a new and (hopefully) improved version further down.


    "Sonnet 18" The Digital Divide

    Like a tardigrade in a tsunami
    Im lost on google.
    You are lost,
    tailor-made rebel of the...
  17. Thread: An Apology

    by SleepyWitch
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    A very Haiku-like description. I like the...

    A very Haiku-like description. I like the unpretentious style of this.
  18. Yes, that's right. Thanks.

    Yes, that's right. Thanks.
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    True. But the poem still isn't set in B'head :)

    True. But the poem still isn't set in B'head :)
  20. Thanks!

    Thanks!
  21. Thanks for your reply! The poem is meant to be a...

    Thanks for your reply!
    The poem is meant to be a bit of a mystery, but I might have made it too mysterious. I'll think of a way to make it a bit clearer.
    Do you think the boyfriend is with the girl...
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    My husband's very bad poem: "I am sad My life...

    My husband's very bad poem:

    "I am sad
    My life is bad."
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    This poem makes me curious about what it was the...

    This poem makes me curious about what it was the 'accomplices' did :)
  24. Greece without You --- please give me feedback

    My phone is messing up the line breaks. Will fix it later. Please give me feedback.




    Greece without You

    A russet convoy snakes up the parched mountain slope,
    towards a grove of sacred...
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    Huh? Why?

    Huh? Why?
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