the flow kinda seemed to be off at certain points but overall I liked the poem...strong emotions :)
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the flow kinda seemed to be off at certain points but overall I liked the poem...strong emotions :)
Thanks Jerry
I really like the title. Nice short poem.
thanks Tailor....will be posting more if I can successfully log myself in
thanks Tailor....will be posting more if I can successfully log myself in
Thank you Danik. :)
I trim my nails
parts of me fall away
as hard crescents on the floor.
A pickled Soul
in a glass jar
fragile as hell.
A bluebottle buzzes near my ear
and sunlight passes through me
translucent...