I like the abstract nature of the words. The flurry of rhymes so close to each other made the poem whiz by.
Thanks :)
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I like the abstract nature of the words. The flurry of rhymes so close to each other made the poem whiz by.
Thanks :)
Do we sleep on soft sands that hold
Our heads with creases of dark dreams?
The night sky sliding through star beams.
Should we shape driftwood of distress untold?
Thanks for reading, tailor.
If your love was money
Of those coins that clotted veins,
Would change have been enough
For you to love and pay your way?
Love did fill up beating hearts,
That paper cut to bleed,
Accounts did...
Wet Pandora’s lips, metamorphosis
Pressed the box like accordion
She aborted then sleeped with Morpheus
Dreaming not, dried her orifice
Dug the hole, laid their corpses with
Torture porn and...
Thank you lol Frankenstein
You're on the right track :) thanks for reading, Shadowlight.
Sometimes.
Pardon us for sabotaging the harvest
and hanging the neck of your Babylon in its gardens.
But we’ve developed a ritual that ripens the darkness.
You can grab a bottle of holy water to chase the...
Standing on the cotton shores,
staring at the sea of dark glass,
I watch your lungs fill with shards
as you breathe in the heartless
obsidian. The black smoke grays
the white sky, filling the...
As I lie in my black room,
their voices move in the shadows
from side to side by my ears,
and I stare into the void.
I can smell the giggles of women
outside of this sterile darkness
which...
Thanks for catching that error. Thought I got most of it; so much text. haha
That video was funny :P lol
Thanks for reading. :)
Standing inside my kitchen I start
pulling the damaged
drawer by the clean,
yellow sink and thinking
of people; I withdraw
the cardboard box of tinfoil
I bought yesterday; my experience
is...
I like the sonic landscape and the images you paint here. It has a lot of sensory depth, and it seems to capture the essence of "age is only a number." An acceptance of death while trying to maintain...
I appreciate the compliment. I was thinking more literally when I wrote that line, I think. A lot of blinds are made of plastic, and I'm saying that the mother of my children drew the plastic blinds...
I appreciate your comments :) Thank you for reading.
The Rabbit walks on moss and rocks
it’s raining mud through broken sticks
the cavern makes arachnids talk
with flames that shadows love to kiss
The Rabbit stumbles into knots
of spiderwebs that...
Lol You're funny. :P I'm glad you enjoyed the wordplay. Sadly the protagonist is me. I didn't focus too much on meter in this piece, but I tried to be straightforward while being metaphorical and...
Sitting in the corner, I was just a sick animal;
and you forcibly cut out my tied tongue.
I wanted to bite you deeply and then lick your blood
to make sure the open wound would soon heal,
but...
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. :)
I'm glad you two enjoyed it. Thank you very much for taking the time to read this. :)
We were having breakfast
that morning,
and I was chewing too loud;
the eggs had too much salt,
the bacon was overcooked,
and the toast was cold.
You asked me if we
had any orange juice:...
he sees Alaska
deep in her eyes
frozen by arctic
winds with chilled-shock
icicles under
pupils from frost
tundra-filled hearts
make the northern lights
color the atmosphere with the...
I like this story. It is very quirky. I like that you put in so many peripheral characters; it really makes the experience come to life. I very much enjoyed the line where the narrator notices the...
I like this better than mine. Good job. I think adding some more concrete nouns would flesh it out more, but I like the tone a lot. Though I didn't like my poem, I'm happy it inspired you to write...