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  1. Thread: pendulum

    by MiltonSatyr
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    I like the abstract nature of the words. The...

    I like the abstract nature of the words. The flurry of rhymes so close to each other made the poem whiz by.

    Thanks :)
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    The Dead See

    Do we sleep on soft sands that hold

    Our heads with creases of dark dreams?

    The night sky sliding through star beams.

    Should we shape driftwood of distress untold?
  3. Thread: Love Money

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Thanks for reading, tailor.

    Thanks for reading, tailor.
  4. Thread: Love Money

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Love Money

    If your love was money
    Of those coins that clotted veins,
    Would change have been enough
    For you to love and pay your way?
    Love did fill up beating hearts,
    That paper cut to bleed,
    Accounts did...
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    Pandora's Lips

    Wet Pandora’s lips, metamorphosis
    Pressed the box like accordion
    She aborted then sleeped with Morpheus
    Dreaming not, dried her orifice
    Dug the hole, laid their corpses with
    Torture porn and...
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    Thank you lol Frankenstein

    Thank you lol Frankenstein
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    You're on the right track :) thanks for reading,...

    You're on the right track :) thanks for reading, Shadowlight.
  8. Thread: Cv19.

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Sometimes.

    Sometimes.
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    The Harvest

    Pardon us for sabotaging the harvest
    and hanging the neck of your Babylon in its gardens.
    But we’ve developed a ritual that ripens the darkness.
    You can grab a bottle of holy water to chase the...
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    The Sea of Obsidian

    Standing on the cotton shores,
    staring at the sea of dark glass,
    I watch your lungs fill with shards
    as you breathe in the heartless
    obsidian. The black smoke grays
    the white sky, filling the...
  11. Thread: Coma

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Coma

    As I lie in my black room,
    their voices move in the shadows
    from side to side by my ears,
    and I stare into the void.

    I can smell the giggles of women
    outside of this sterile darkness
    which...
  12. Thread: Tinfoil

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Thanks for catching that error. Thought I got...

    Thanks for catching that error. Thought I got most of it; so much text. haha
    That video was funny :P lol
    Thanks for reading. :)
  13. Thread: Tinfoil

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    Tinfoil

    Standing inside my kitchen I start
    pulling the damaged
    drawer by the clean,
    yellow sink and thinking
    of people; I withdraw
    the cardboard box of tinfoil
    I bought yesterday; my experience
    is...
  14. Thread: Nettles

    by MiltonSatyr
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    I like the sonic landscape and the images you...

    I like the sonic landscape and the images you paint here. It has a lot of sensory depth, and it seems to capture the essence of "age is only a number." An acceptance of death while trying to maintain...
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    I appreciate the compliment. I was thinking more...

    I appreciate the compliment. I was thinking more literally when I wrote that line, I think. A lot of blinds are made of plastic, and I'm saying that the mother of my children drew the plastic blinds...
  16. Thread: The Rabbit

    by MiltonSatyr
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    I appreciate your comments :) Thank you for...

    I appreciate your comments :) Thank you for reading.
  17. Thread: The Rabbit

    by MiltonSatyr
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    The Rabbit

    The Rabbit walks on moss and rocks
    it’s raining mud through broken sticks
    the cavern makes arachnids talk
    with flames that shadows love to kiss
    The Rabbit stumbles into knots
    of spiderwebs that...
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    Lol You're funny. :P I'm glad you enjoyed the...

    Lol You're funny. :P I'm glad you enjoyed the wordplay. Sadly the protagonist is me. I didn't focus too much on meter in this piece, but I tried to be straightforward while being metaphorical and...
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    Blackened Glass

    Sitting in the corner, I was just a sick animal;
    and you forcibly cut out my tied tongue.
    I wanted to bite you deeply and then lick your blood
    to make sure the open wound would soon heal,
    but...
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    Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate you...

    Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. :)
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    I'm glad you two enjoyed it. Thank you very much...

    I'm glad you two enjoyed it. Thank you very much for taking the time to read this. :)
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    Orange Juice

    We were having breakfast
    that morning,
    and I was chewing too loud;
    the eggs had too much salt,
    the bacon was overcooked,
    and the toast was cold.
    You asked me if we
    had any orange juice:...
  23. Thread: Alaska

    by MiltonSatyr
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    Alaska

    he sees Alaska
    deep in her eyes
    frozen by arctic
    winds with chilled-shock
    icicles under
    pupils from frost
    tundra-filled hearts
    make the northern lights
    color the atmosphere with the...
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    I like this story. It is very quirky. I like that...

    I like this story. It is very quirky. I like that you put in so many peripheral characters; it really makes the experience come to life. I very much enjoyed the line where the narrator notices the...
  25. Thread: Hide

    by MiltonSatyr
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    I like this better than mine. Good job. I think...

    I like this better than mine. Good job. I think adding some more concrete nouns would flesh it out more, but I like the tone a lot. Though I didn't like my poem, I'm happy it inspired you to write...
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