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  1. Thread: Cravings

    by Makai
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    Background then. Most of the poetry I write is...

    Background then. Most of the poetry I write is based on things I am resolving. In this case some good friends of mine are right on the edge of divorce. She is straining at the leash of blame and...
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    This is fabulous, I can feel the crunch and wait...

    This is fabulous, I can feel the crunch and wait for the laughter while sympathizing with the fall. It gives me such great visuals, I truly enjoyed reading your poem.:thumbs_up
  3. Thread: Cravings

    by Makai
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    Cravings

    I crave silence in the
    passing sighs of enfolded
    wind's wild, green blur,
    outside a box my past
    longs to keep me in.

    Caged thrust of spine
    compensates for nothing,
    if my feet won't release...
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    Marvelous Prince, as soon as I read this gem it...

    Marvelous Prince, as soon as I read this gem it made me smile. It was akin to lighting a light for me. Perhaps it is because I have been privileged to know and love you for some time, but I think it...
  5. Thread: Blue Collar

    by Makai
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    Blue Collar

    It's different in the high desert,
    there's an openness
    that clears your cluttered sky
    and simplifies your life.

    At first you worry
    about clothes and makeup;
    then the wind takes over
    and...
  6. Thread: Each word...

    by Makai
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    Your writing is a personification of smooth...

    Your writing is a personification of smooth pontifications on the nature of man. The Everyman, his spirit, how he loves, quirks and inconsistencies flow painting incredible word pictures. I revel in...
  7. Thread: Burnt Cross

    by Makai
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    Burnt Cross

    I'm not quite White,
    spoony fairy-tale secrets...
    archaically encrypted in,
    hushed Ivory discretion.

    Tar brush, dipped in honey pot~
    painted our temporal arbor,
    with Gadarene Cherokee~
    not...
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    Your welcome Sophia, your poem is beautiful,...

    Your welcome Sophia, your poem is beautiful, strong, poetic heartbreak~tender and sharp~ which is how heartbreak feels. I truly love it and admire the heck out of you for writing it.

    Thank you...
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    I loved every word, every metaphor, every line....

    I loved every word, every metaphor, every line. This poem has power, beauty and grace, it sings your heartbreak and acceptance mingled into the same tempestuous teapot.

    If someone finds the taste...
  10. Thread: Art of God

    by Makai
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    Art of God

    Lord, your colors speak to me
    in a language, I almost know.

    If angels sang my lullaby's,
    when curled inside the womb~
    that memory would follow birth
    seeding life, with Eden's tune.

    Gardens...
  11. Thread: Wildfire

    by Makai
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    Wildfire

    Flame-crowned, panicked mountainside;
    hours, suffering carrion-dragon's breath,
    under drowning dry-season sun,
    smoked to umbra submission.

    Wildfire monstrously counting coup~
    ravening hunger;...
  12. Thread: Weightless

    by Makai
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    Weightless

    Remember flying dreams?
    Pixie dusted fairy tales~
    arched my infant heart.

    To fly like an arrow
    a floating kite,
    Supergirl...

    World-walking
    weightless dreamland~
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    I adore Kitschy things but I don't see that in...

    I adore Kitschy things but I don't see that in your poem at all Prince, I see love and hear a reminder to love, especially the children.
  14. Thread: Snippets

    by Makai
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    This is much more than a snippet Prince, this is...

    This is much more than a snippet Prince, this is the world in a tea cup.

    I Loved this poem, the wonderful way you can take me with you to far places and intimate moments is a wonder.
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    Waterfalls of Thought

    We cannot know
    the challenges faced
    in each life, when friends
    are not in view.

    Patterns days take;
    warp and weave,
    a tapestry of paths
    growing thin in places,
    rising high walls in others~
  16. Thread: Bedeviled

    by Makai
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    Bedeviled

    For this poetess
    after loosing my words
    I check all the cupboards
    in my inspiration stations

    To find them barren
    yawning
    empty egg sacks,
    producing
    nothing viable
  17. Thread: Rusty Knight

    by Makai
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    Well I do appreciate all the constructive advice,...

    Well I do appreciate all the constructive advice, live and learn my friends.
  18. Thread: Rusty Knight

    by Makai
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    I suppose it would be impossible to speak to...

    I suppose it would be impossible to speak to everyone all the time. This is more a metaphoric take on lost love, longing for what is gone but not gone inside.
  19. Thread: Walk Away

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    Very good, I think because you didn't overwrite...

    Very good, I think because you didn't overwrite it is able to speak so clearly.
  20. Thread: Twilight

    by Makai
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    I actually thought this very clever, what makes...

    I actually thought this very clever, what makes it rather heavy is that it reads as prose. Perhaps the other commenters are right "less is more" in this instance.
  21. Thread: Rusty Knight

    by Makai
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    Rusty Knight

    Rusty Knight in iron armor,
    metal not encompassing you~
    defining your yearnings.

    Unveiling echoes
    of all that was and will be,
    into a tin can...

    Taut string
    stretches vibrating vows,
  22. Thread: God's Fancy

    by Makai
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    You honor my efforts Oh Dragon, thank you so...

    You honor my efforts Oh Dragon, thank you so much. Dancing is a song in motion...

    (ps) every time I read "Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup!...
  23. Thread: God's Fancy

    by Makai
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    Yes indeed Prince, balanced was one of those...

    Yes indeed Prince, balanced was one of those sneaky typos because the spelling was correct but the word was not. Thanks for pointing that out my friend. Love ya, V
  24. Thread: God's Fancy

    by Makai
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    Thank you very much kiz_paws for your very kind...

    Thank you very much kiz_paws for your very kind comment!
  25. Thread: God's Fancy

    by Makai
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    You encourage me, that is very good of you, thank...

    You encourage me, that is very good of you, thank you Delta40
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