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    ..many images..flows well.. ..sp...

    ..many images..flows well..


    ..sp
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    The Moments

    when she fell,
    not moon, nor wind responded
    'an abysmal fall, indeed, '
    was the carnal cry in the woods
    'he who shelters such a wand
    will surely be understood'

    and the words fell like...
  3. Thread: Sweet.

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    ..patience the key..but I found the poem...

    ..patience the key..but I found the poem amusing/meant to be amusing..enjoyed..sp
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    The Solemn Song

    the day after the parting,
    he wrote a solemn song—
    sing, ye birds of admiration,
    sing for this lonely one

    nouns and pronouns adrift,
    a canary's chirp afar—
    listen to the sparkling lilacs
    of...
  5. Thread: Fingers

    by Spiros Zafiris
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    ..hello Jerrybaldy.>I like it..mostly, I like how...

    ..hello Jerrybaldy.>I like it..mostly, I like how you start and end with same line..the only
    thing is that because you deal, almost entirely, with the person of poem being in your head,
    why...
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    ..thanks again, you two (PB & Silas)..and worry...

    ..thanks again, you two (PB & Silas)..and worry not, I'm very careful
    with my doctor-prescribed meds..oh, PB, my feelings were not hurt;
    we're communicating...all's well.>sp
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    ..thanks much Silas.>for your suggestion..the...

    ..thanks much Silas.>for your suggestion..the phrase you mentioned liking was also a favorite of another poet in another site
    ..I may be wrong, but the way I have it, a hyphen belongs there:...
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    ..Pompey Bum.>though I am accustomed to...

    ..Pompey Bum.>though I am accustomed to exchanging opinions with polite poets/people,
    I always thank everyone for their time, even the ne'er-do-wells..thanks..sp
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    ..double up..Rewrite Version

    at the back of my notebook
    I mark down the medications I take
    throughout the day
    first, I do the noting
    and, right after, I swallow
    the pill whose turn it is

    now, there are times
    when I fool...
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    ..overall, I enjoyed..but,myself, I found the...

    ..overall, I enjoyed..but,myself, I found the last 2 stanzas kinda weak..best of luck should you rewrite..sp
  11. Thread: Auguste

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    ..thanks much, Danik.>nice to see the 'enjoyed...

    ..thanks much, Danik.>nice to see the 'enjoyed much' team pulling ahead.>sp
  12. Thread: Auguste

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    ..thanks T..S.>for your comment/opinion..well,...

    ..thanks T..S.>for your comment/opinion..well, counting the other 2 places I posted
    this recent poem, so far, it's one tarradiddle and 3 enjoyed much—or such sentiment.>sp
  13. Thread: Auguste

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    Auguste

    soon enough I discovered
    her neighbor calls him Caspar or Caspor
    but it wasn't long
    before I named him Auguste

    he has claimed my love's apartmentó
    even hypnotized her to have ready
    water and...
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    ..hello.>I think it is well written..I didn't get...

    ..hello.>I think it is well written..I didn't get bored, not once..a few things.>almost all modern poets
    don't upper case 1st letters of each line, except when, in some cases, it's done so as to...
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    With You

    With you
    it does not matter
    if I do not hold
    the reins
    if my left toe twitches
    and your body
    remains silent
    to my passion
    your bedroom
    is not my empire
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    ..well written..but to answer..all the...

    ..well written..but to answer..all the well-known/quite famous artists-of-all-arts I've known/do know
    have become so through hard work and much talent..true, sometimes I thought, briefly, there were...
  17. Thread: ..ahems

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    ..ahems

    they who sometimes
    spy by my door, propel
    the loudest ahems
    should I exit and linger
    a second near their welcome mat
    ~
    circa 2008..©2008/2016 Spiros Zafiris
    channeled, spirit Harmony; reaching...
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    A Smilke To Rest On

    outdistancing his worries,
    the tender boy offered a smile
    to no one in particular
    sunbeams raced to alight on each tress

    **** **** ****

    ..circa 2003..Copyright 2003/2016 Spiros Zafiris...
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    ..hi..I enjoyed the read.>sp

    ..hi..I enjoyed the read.>sp
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    ..the bolt

    it must have been a rose
    to send the death rattle's
    zigzag bolt back
    had it traveled one more instant,
    through my lips, I was done for
    ~
    ©2010/2014/2016 Spiros Zafiris
    ..first in Ink, Sweat &...
  21. Thread: Refuge

    by Spiros Zafiris
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    ______________________ ..thanks much,, Mahmod.....

    ______________________
    ..thanks much,, Mahmod..

    ..>sp
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  22. Thread: Refuge

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    Refuge

    giving her a shelter,
    giving her a rest,
    he felt safe
    kind forces would whisper
    entire galaxies of stars
    would focus Their protectiveness

    "he is helping one of us,"
    Their beams of safety...
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    ..always quickly fade

    when the demonic wildcats
    go on a feeding frenzy
    at the very center of my being
    while I sleep, and, yet, have
    been kindled fully aware,
    I wait for the attack to intensify
    because, at the very...
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    ..the forces

    she is the emblem
    of my solitude kindled
    with alarming grace
    each candle, every rose
    is the life force of her glory
    ~
    ©2010/2016 Spiros Zafiris
    1st in Sketchbook 5-4, JulAug_2010
    ~
  25. Thread: ..angry

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    ..thank you, you three, for your comments..YesNo,...

    ..thank you, you three, for your comments..YesNo, I remember you.>sp
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