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  1. Thread: Wrong turn

    by Jerrybaldy
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    I had a feeling you'd like this one. You have...

    I had a feeling you'd like this one. You have your tastes strong 1st person narrative of a broken character in a envision-able scene with a dark turn.And that is just my style, LOL

    That was...
  2. Thread: Wrong turn

    by Jerrybaldy
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    The thing is Shadowlight I don’t like reading...

    The thing is Shadowlight I don’t like reading poetry that much. There was a time there was a regular crowd on here, some good, but would get in the habit of complimenting people you like. To be...
  3. Thread: Wrong turn

    by Jerrybaldy
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    Don’t want to go on but found myself reading it...

    Don’t want to go on but found myself reading it again. There is a sub story of loss though buried threatening to emerge and lead to the end of the poem. At least that’s how I read it with the...
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    by Jerrybaldy
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    I’ve also been inspired by this to go back and...

    I’ve also been inspired by this to go back and read some of your previous posts. Although I commented at the time ‘Remnant Goodbye’ is also still outstanding.
  5. Thread: Wrong turn

    by Jerrybaldy
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    This is great Shadowlight. I really enjoyed the...

    This is great Shadowlight. I really enjoyed the ride and the dark turning at the end. Your narration kept me interested throughout. Good job
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