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  1. Thread: I digress

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    Thank you for your critique '

    Thank you for your critique '
  2. Thread: I digress

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    Thank you folks

    Thank you folks
  3. Thread: I digress

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    I digress

    I Digress
    Sitting at a window table in the cosy Pizza-carto looking out on a bright day. Everything looked right with the world until, that is, you saw the leaning angle of the people walking down...
  4. Thank you

    Thank you
  5. That one and half glasses of red wine mood.

    That one and half glasses of red wine mood.

    If only life could be lived in that one and half glasses of red wine mood. Less would not achieve it, more would destroy it.

    The mood where you...
  6. Thread: The Coma

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    Thank you.

    Thank you.
  7. Thread: Liberty

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    Thank you for your comments I do see what you...

    Thank you for your comments I do see what you mean and I have used that in other stories but this time I wanted it to be a sudden pull up short shock. I read your story very good .
  8. Thread: Liberty

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    Thank you much appreciated.

    Thank you much appreciated.
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    I enjoyed that a reflection on our times.

    I enjoyed that a reflection on our times.
  10. Thread: Liberty

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    Liberty

    Liberty
    Ray sat in the covered cockpit of his inshore fishing boat. In front of him the Sunday newspaper in his hand a mug of strong, hot, sweet tea. In half an hour the tide would be high enough...
  11. Thread: The Bed

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    Thank you for your comments very kind

    Thank you for your comments very kind
  12. Thread: The Bed

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    The Bed

    The Bed

    The sound of a sharp slap followed by a raucous cry heralds the arrival of another infant into this world. The mother looks up from the bed and is told it is a boy or it is a girl and...
  13. Thank you both.

    Thank you both.
  14. That one and half glasses of red wine mood

    That one and half glasses of red wine mood

    If only life could be lived in that one and half glasses of red wine mood. Less would not achieve it, more would destroy it.

    The mood where you mourn...
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    Thank you.

    Thank you.
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    Thank you both. Punctuation was never my strong...

    Thank you both. Punctuation was never my strong point but I take the point and will try to be more mindful of the need in the future.
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    Shufflin’ Sid

    He made his way slowly along the well trodden and well remembered path. Once he had run, no raced along this self same path, once he had strode along this self same path, once he...
  18. Thread: The Coma

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    Thank you

    Thank you
  19. Thread: The Coma

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    Thank you

    Thank you
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    Problems posting a short story

    I tried to send a PM to Admin, then the administrator ans finally Admin007. as follows " Twice I have submitted an offering to this forum; twice it has gone to the mods; twice it has disappeared...
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    I tried to send a PM to Admin, then the...

    I tried to send a PM to Admin, then the administrator ans finally Admin007. as follows " Twice I have submitted an offering to this forum; twice it has gone to the mods; twice it has disappeared...
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    I've posted it again and it says it has gone to a...

    I've posted it again and it says it has gone to a moderator for vetting or some such which is what it told me last time.
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    I posted this short story not brilliant but it...

    I posted this short story not brilliant but it just disappeared

    The Coma


    Very gradually the sound of church bells filtered through his subconscious. The room was in darkness and through...
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    waste of time

    Well that was a waste of time; posted a first offering of a short story a few days ago allowed time for scrutiny and - - - - - - nothing.

    Question what is the point?
  25. Thread: The Coma

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    The Coma

    The Coma


    Very gradually the sound of church bells filtered through his subconscious. The room was in darkness and through that darkness he heard his Anna calling to him. His mind in a turmoil...
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