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    Thanks you for the feedback I have big plans for...

    Thanks you for the feedback I have big plans for white walls the doctor is going to use hypnotherapy to divulge in to his past so you find out why he's there in the first place :)
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    Excerpt from something new I have started. Want...

    Excerpt from something new I have started. Want to see if people would keep reading.


    White Walls


    The walls of my “cell” were...
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    Would anyone be willing to read my 16,000 word...

    Would anyone be willing to read my 16,000 word story. My friends have read It and loved it but I don't know of they are just being bias because they are my friends. I put a lot of work into it and...
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    And this for sure was not a masterpiece so your...

    And this for sure was not a masterpiece so your comments are not demoralizing at all. I know I am starting out and I don't know where I'm going wrong if I don't let people read what I have written :)
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    Thank you so much for the feed back of course I...

    Thank you so much for the feed back of course I take everything as contsructive criticism this is the reason why i joined. I have been on the fence about this piece but didnt know where it was...
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    Her Happily Ever After Was Closer Than She...

    Her Happily Ever After Was Closer Than She Thought



    “I’m sorry ma’am but we don’t have any choice, you don’t pay your rent and you don’t get to live here it’s simple as that. You have the day...
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    Thank you, I didn't know what to classify it as,...

    Thank you, I didn't know what to classify it as, this is all very new for me. I really appreciate the feedback as I don't always know if i'm doing things correctly. I do have another story available...
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    Like even if they get old fast. Alarm Clocks

    Like even if they get old fast.

    Alarm Clocks
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    I would have to go with Great White Shark, might...

    I would have to go with Great White Shark, might as well just get it over and done with.

    If you had to choose would you relive over

    Highschool

    or

    Your most embarrassing moment?
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    When could I force myself to gather enough...

    When could I force myself to gather enough courage...
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    0, apparently i'm not that popular but texts on...

    0, apparently i'm not that popular but texts on the other hand.

    How many times have you said I love you today?
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    I agree with steven's comment. I thoroughly...

    I agree with steven's comment. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
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    I could of kept going and you should to :)

    I could of kept going and you should to :)
  14. Thread: Lockets

    by Jenster540
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    This definitely makes you think, when you first...

    This definitely makes you think, when you first mentioned keys that deteriorate then locks are left to never be unopened. I immediately thought of alzheimers patients, not sure if thats where it...
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    My Short Stories Feedback Please

    Winter Wonderland
    by Jennifer Paradis

    The air was crisp, flakes slowly fell as gravity pulled on them gently; catching the midday breeze on its way down to earth. I always loved the winter...
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    Sticky: Hello! So this Is all very new to me but I am...

    Hello! So this Is all very new to me but I am excited to grow as a writer and writing somewhere, where I can get feedback is something I am truly looking for. I am 25 a stay at home mom of 2 (5 & 3)....
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