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Beautiful post.

haha oh my goodness this is awesome

alone, by the fireside,
aching for some
resurrection
between the pages of an unnamed novel
left for dead in an old barn
in the backyard,
I dream of it all.
you, my love,
like a muse captured...

Dear fellow LitNetters:
I'd like to take this opportunity to thank each and every one of you who reads my posts for your support. It's been a rough few months, and one of the activities I have been...

Thank you all for the wonderful comments and suggestions :) and tailor, I definitely didn't do a great job of emphasizing what I meant, the last stanza was aching for a human/tangible muse, lover, or...

I can still smell the lavender in my hair
from sleeping in the field that night,
my hands wrapt about the belly of the Earth,
I swear I could feel a heartbeat.

The moon shone like a secret...

So wise :)

I love this, ChicagoReader! Perhaps it is the fact that I am in love with love poems, but I didn't find this anywhere near what hillwalker describes as "one of a thousand feeble pop songs". I enjoyed...

Wow, this is absolutely lovely. Bravo, Hawkman, bravo :)


love
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Thanks, Hawkman :) just changed it :D

Haha I love this! Entertaining :)

Wow, this is absolutely beautiful :) I love the imagery, ea!

i would like to lie with you
in a garden of moonflowers
my legs wrapt about your frame
like vines of ivy bent about an old home
tired and frail.
I see the strength in us, a bond
everlasting, ...

I love the dramatic break between the third and short fourth stanza--it is incredibly effective in portraying the hopelessness in paddling, even in a shallow sea. Love it! Thanks for sharing,

in...

I love how innocent and deep your poetry is--it's very refreshing! Keep posting,

in loving kindness,
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Wow, this is absolutely AMAZING! Are you going to compose music to go along with this? If so, I'd LOVE to hear. Simply incredible!

in lovingkindness,
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What a nice, yet sad, poem. The only thing I noticed is "laughters", which threw me off a bit, but besides that, I love it all. The thing that caught my eye the most was how it started off like a...

Holy molasses. That was powerful.

I loved the entirety of it, such a beautiful emotion so concisely displayed...
Kudos to you,
in loving kindness,
Kate

I love this completely.

I agree with free, this disconnectedness is what brings it all together, in a sense. I loved the lines: "The waves and seagulls glares have drawn me into the blue sinkholes of your eyes/How my...

toes stuck in hot dry sand,
my legs like scissors cutting through the beach,
running, sprinting, heaving across the shoreline,
searching for your image in the sunset and finding
only lost...

Very beautiful in its brevity! Thanks for sharing :)

LOL hill, totally agree with you :)

thanks, doralace :) and yes, prince, I would have to rework it, but I do feel that you are right! I will edit in a while, let me know what you think.

thank you so much everyadventure, delta, and jerrybaldy! delta, thanks for the tip! you are right, it does sound better that way. and yes, jerry, each poem is an enormous piece of me, so that is a...