Then it rains...
Closet closed, cant get away,
not random, when you look that way,
cant stand it, that one day I'll pay,
lest right now - it rain again.
a running score, me one them four,...
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Then it rains...
Closet closed, cant get away,
not random, when you look that way,
cant stand it, that one day I'll pay,
lest right now - it rain again.
a running score, me one them four,...
My attempt:
A faint memory can thus posses,
the crowning jewel of ones success,
- life's trials are cruel, and quite unkempt,
but force our hand to march for best
and force us thus to take...
Not at all Pen'.
You may have noticed, that poem looked a little out of place for the title of your contest. In fact I wrote the poem years ago, and your title reminded me of it.
The reason I...
Decided to remove my entry. Sorry.
A cold and quiet city night,
A restless mood - the vampire’s bite
A haze is cut by moons blue light
To offer you a dim lit sight
Buildings buttress from cobble streets
Foundations built from...
Autolycus, yes your poem is a clear winner here.
You had my vote from the time I read it but didn't want to influence the judgment.
And AuntShecky, I loved your three line verses, which gave...
Call another client.
Hate.
discombobulantarianism?
This is without editing, as it came to me while walking home from the club drunk as a skunk!
I recorded the poem on my phone and simply transcribed it.
I spoke this, as you read it.
...
I detect an influence of drugs in this poem.
Forgive me if I'm wrong...
A spitefulness is also apparent, perhaps unrequited feelings?
All in all, a very curious poem, asking not one question...
I have a faded memory of when I was young (11-12y/o) and walking the streets "trick or treating" and everyone I posed the question to said "what?"...
Hmm... But I do love the Gothic dress code. -...
Not jog... ride or walk or gym, but no jog... Close!
Next: A domineering personality!!!
Cailin, you sound like a perfect candidate for Vegemite!
Nutella is best enjoyed on the freshest bread, and a liberal application of that chocolaty goodness!
A note for the uninitiated:
If you like nutella, your going to LOVE Vegemite! Hehehe!
No, I am not a Jedi Knight.
I believe an inquisitive young person will post next.
Yes, haunting, exactly what word was easing its way into my head as I read this.
Well done Shadow!
A strange poem Justin, I'm having difficulty desifering if it is as simple as it sounds...
OOooOOoo Good one! - Love!
Foreplay?
I like gum!
An... Atheist...
Halloween Pumpkins? I live in Australia and I'm glad that we don't celebrate Halloween here. However the pic does look kind of cool without those nasty faces on them instead-
6/10...
Love car races! Go lowndesy! V8 Supercar driver in Australia. Also Go Ambrose! Previously a V8 supercar driver now racing in American Speedway races.
Motorbike races?
Have done it once... that I'm aware of. Didn't particularly mind it actually!
Day dreaming.
Seriously is that someones belly - with make up on? 3/10
andave_ya - Ya I very much agree. lovely avatar!
I have many female friends, however I am also married, and I cannot speculate about what might happen if I were single????
Run the numbers - I don't think anyone could have a meaningful...