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    I see what you are saying :) thankyou

    I see what you are saying :) thankyou
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    Sorry I have had my hands full the past few days....

    Sorry I have had my hands full the past few days. Here is my lastest attempt:

    Its five o’clock in the afternoon and her plane has just landed. It has been three months since I last saw her. I...
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    Its five o’clock in the afternoon and her plane...

    Its five o’clock in the afternoon and her plane has just landed. It has been three months since I last saw her. I watch her walking up the board walk – struck by her familiar brown hair and sparkling...
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    Is there anything further you would suggest to...

    Is there anything further you would suggest to take out?
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    When I get to the beach the sun is bright and I...

    When I get to the beach the sun is bright and I am greeted by a warm salty breeze that hits my face.

    Should I leave that to describe the weather and what type of day it is?
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    Here is another attempt. Its five o’clock in...

    Here is another attempt.

    Its five o’clock in the afternoon and her plane has just landed. It has been three months since I last saw her. I watch her walking up the board walk – struck by her...
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    Is this on the right track? Its five o’clock...

    Is this on the right track?

    Its five o’clock in the afternoon and her plane has just landed. It has been three months since I last saw her. I watch her walking up the board walk – struck by her...
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    Thank you very much hillwalker for your time and...

    Thank you very much hillwalker for your time and effort, this is exaclty what I was looking for. I shall rewrite it and repost it.
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    It Was A Perfect Summers Day

    It was five o’clock in the afternoon when her plane landed. It had been three months since I had seen her last. I recognise her with easy by her long brown hair and sparkling brown eyes as she...
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    thank you very much for your help hillwalker :) I...

    thank you very much for your help hillwalker :) I shall edit it now.
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    Comparison of Two Advertisements

    Am I on the right track? I am meant to comparing two advertisements. I tried to display the adds but it wouldn't let me.

    Advertising is used to catch the eye of a member of the public. All the ads...
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    Response to a form of Communication

    This is my english assignment and my teacher continues to return my assignment and changing her mind of what she wants me to do. As I am currently in year 12 time is running out and I was wondering...
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    Thankyou very much for your ideas. I am trying to...

    Thankyou very much for your ideas. I am trying to keep to true identity of the character hidden though.
  14. Thread: Good Name?

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    Good Name?

    After three long years of training, I, Xavier, had finally been accepted into one of the largest races in Australia. I had been training extremely hard with my coach, Mr Morgan, doing training...
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